The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 2013completed

Day 3

The storm hasn't stopped yet, and I'm getting a little worried about the boat. The storm is getting really bad. I'm going to try to sleep so that I won't think about the storm anymore. Okay, so I can't sleep. Since I can't sleep, I'm going to tell you the history of "Death Island". In 1892, a very adventurous man went out in a small boat and said that he was going to sail the whole ocean. He kept a journal with him. At one point he wrote this in his journal:" I saw a humongous". No other words were in the journal. Many people believe that a storm sank his boat, but I know that it wasn't a storm. It was a creature from "Death Island". In 1893-1899 5,000 people went missing. All of them had proof of something weird happening. One of them, Jonathan Timothy Licit, had video proof. In the beginning of the video, he says his name and starts talking about the many weird things that had happened in that area. In the middle of the video, you hear a weird noise and Jonathan jumps like he's scared. At the end of the video, you can see an island and then the camera falls into the water. The camera was found south of the Atlantic Ocean approximately 10 years after the video was filmed. In 1900-1999 85,719 people went missing. 26,612 of them had proof of the island. 1,000 of the people were in a search crew. None of the people were found.
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woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!! :)
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I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
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I will :)
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on December 20, 2015
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
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Okay, thank you for the tip.
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on December 15, 2014
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
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on July 11, 2014
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
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