The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 2013completed

Day 2

I can tell that a storm is about to happen, because I can taste the moisture in the air. I need to prepare. All that I have to do before the storm happens is: deploy the storm hut, put all of my food in the storm hut, put my water in the storm hut, find my rain water catcher and purifier, latch rain water catcher and purifier to boat (Outside of the storm hut, of course), put my bedding in the storm hut, put everything important in the storm hut, and close the storm huts opening. The storm is pretty bad, but hopefully the boat won't flip.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 2 users

Comments (7)

woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!! :)
reply
I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
reply
I will :)
reply
About Author
Report
on December 21, 2015
About Author
Report
on December 20, 2015
About Author
Report
on December 20, 2015
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
reply
Okay, thank you for the tip.
reply
About Author
Report
on December 15, 2014
About Author
Report
on December 15, 2014
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
reply
About Author
Report
on July 11, 2014
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
reply
About Author
Report
on June 29, 2014