Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

Party above all parties

Party above all parties
Flash was at the door welcoming the guests as they turned up. Shinning Armor am Cadence turn up, "Daisy requests some help from you Cadence." cadence nods and heads to the room. Daisy was in the room getting ready then Cadence walks in, "you look beautiful in that dress." Daisy smiles, "thanks. You look amazing in your dress. Could you help me with my make-up. I don't know what eyeliner or lipstick colour to do." Cadence helps, "hmm, you could use some gold glitter... Ah I have some in my purse." And she puts it on Daisy, "you look beau-ti-ful... Are you ready for this party." Daisy nods and both mares join the party.

As Daisy an Cadence walk down the hall all the ponies gasp and murmur "they look beautiful." And "Look at there dresses." Cadence smiles at Daisy then goes to join her husband. Flash finishes greeting as Pat says "I'll take over." And he trots over and stands beside Daisy, "wow, you are Gorgeous." Daisy blushes, "thanks."
DJ-colt announces over the speaker, "alright every pony, DJ Vynel Scrach is in the house, lets get D-D-Dancing."
Every pony joins in dancing after 3 or 4 songs. After 12 song DJ-colt announces, "before we get into the slower dances Flash has something he wants to share with all you ponies." Flash brings daisy to the centre of the dance floor, "Daisy, from the moment I laid eyes on you I knew you were the one. We have been dating and living together for 4 maybe 5 years now." A pony from the crowd calls, "5 years." Flash kneels, "would you let me make you the happiest mare alive. Will you become my wife." Flash takes out the box with the 14 carrot necklace. With tears in her eyes daisy replies, "I. I... Yes, yes."  DJ-colt says, "may I be the 1st to congratulate you. Rock on." DJ-colt puts on 'Amazed' by Lonestar. Flash and Daisy, Shinning Armor and Cadence, Dash and Big Bill, Big Mac and Cheralee. All dance in the middle. After the dance Flash and Daisy go and sit outside.
Mi Amore Cadenza (cadence) comes and sits next to them. "That explains everything now Daisy." Daisy nods, "yes. Nothing can upset me now. I am so happy I can't contain it." Flash looks at cadence, "where's shinning." Cadence sighs, "Hanging with Edward, Big Mac and Big Bill." Flash looks at Daisy, "I would join them, but then I'd miss you to much." Daisy kisses him and Cadence says, "Ah, now that's true love."

Inside Celestia calls, "every pony listen up." Every pony turns heads facing her and she continues, "what a night so far. 1st off congratulations Daisy am Flash." The crowd cheers. Celestia continues, "I wish you both happy years... Secondly Welcome to the RC AKA Royal Club, all us royals we welcome you..." The crowd cheers again. "And lastly" Celestia continues, "I Wish to thank PP, Pat, an Pinkie Pie for making the party possible." The party ponies dip there head in thanks. Flash speaks, "every pony. I though of this party to celebrate the royals. I would like to make a toast to Princess Celestia my wise Aunty, Princess Luna for her beautiful night and kindness. Thank you for Being like a 2nd mother, nana Luaren For raising such a amazing Daughter, Princess Lilly for our long friendship. May it last forever, and my mother Raincloud thank you for raising me into the Alicorn I am today, My dear Sister Snow star. May the future bring you happiness, and my older sister Mi Amore Cadenza, to our happy future ruling side by side, and lastly  my father RainbowFlash. I will miss you father, I hope you are in a happy place." Every pony cheers.

AJ goes up on stage and calls, "this party need some good ol' country music, this ones for the royals." AJ clears her throat, "Yee-hoo!
Raise this roof, raise this roof
One, two, move your hoof
Together, we can raise this roof
One, two, move your hoof
Up, up, up, go the sounds
Dance in place,  or Dance around
Turn 'em round quick by the right elbow
Grab a new partner, here we go. Raise this roof, raise this roof
One, two, move your hoof
Together, we can raise this roof
One, two, move your hoof
Up, up, up, go the sounds
Dance in place,  or Dance around
Turn 'em round quick by the right elbow
Now bow to your partner and there we go."
Flash and daisy puff, daisy speaks, "where did you learn to dance like that." Flash smiles, "from Dash and Big Bill." Dash pipes in, "good thing mama Said ne'er give up. He was clumsy as a Cat on stilts. Now ya are as swift as a swan." Dash is pulled into another dance. Luna comes up to them, "Daisy, you wouldn't mind if I Had a dance with my nephew." Daisy replies, "not at all Aunty Luna." And Luna and Flash go to dance. DJ pon-3 announces, "A slow song dedicated to Flash and Daisy by Princess Luna and Princess Celestia. It's called Celestia's Ballard." Luna smiles, "it was my sisters Idea." As they dance memories flash in Flashes mind, one memory kept repeating, "Aunty Luna, can we talk privately.

" Luna nods and they both Fly onto some loose clouds, "Being this close to you brought back a memory that I can't get my head around." Luna replies, "Oh, and what was it." Flash sighs, "in this memory. I saw Aunty Celestia and you Fighting. I saw Hatred in your eyes." Luna cringes, "yes. Well you see when Tia and I were new to ruling she got the hang of it. She basked in the limelight, leaving me in the shadows. Soon after Hatred took hold, I became nightmare moon. And well you know the mares tale." Flash nods his head, "But what I don't get was that was over 1000 yrs ago. My parents weren't even born then." Luna sighs, "it's a power you have, you can see into the past through ones eyes. A power you must use wisely." Flash nods. After some silence Luna flies back to the Party. Luna's words echo in flashes head, 'you can see into the past through ones eyes. A power you must use wisely.' Flashes thoughts are broken by a voice, "Flash, are you ok." Flash sees Lauren, "oh hey nana. Yeah everything's fine." Lauren puts her hoof on his shoulder, "I know that look, what is it." Flash sighs, "nana, what power do you have." Lauren replies, "power, look around you. I created it." Flash smiles, "and Aunty Luna has dreams and controles the moon am stars. Aunty Celestia controles the sun. Cadence with love. Twilight with Magic..." Lauren nods, "my child, each alicorn has a power to help with there rule... You rule critters so your power could be something like reading minds, understanding. Stuff like that." Flash blurts out, "I can see the past through ones eyes." Lauren looked shocked then replied, "well lets see how good you are with it. Use your power to see who ... To see the stallion that is  Luna and Celestia's father." Flash nods then in a heart beat gasps, "Zeus. Is there father." Lauren nods, "yes, he died before Luna was born, but wasn't around much for Celestia... I must be off. It's past my bedtime. Thanks for the party." Flash hugs her, "thank you. Your welcome. And love you." Lauren flies off soundlessly. Flash decides to fly back to the party.

After what seemed like ages and an instant the party was over. Flash farewells the last pony. As he closes the door he sees Daisy is already asleep on the couch, so he picks her up (with magic) and both fall asleep.
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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