Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

Pony pals: 2 (ON HOLD)

More unfolds as Flash and Daisy find new friends and watch there fowls grow. There will be a surprise guest... Who will it be?

published on August 07, 2013not completed

Royal chapter

Royal chapter
As Luna reads Flashes letter her sister calls out, "Luna, may I come in." Without lifting her head from the letter Luna opens her bedroom door. Celestia continues, "thank you dear sister. I hope I'm not disturbing you." Luna looks up, "it's nothing important, just a letter from Flash. So Tia, what's on your mind." Celestia answers, "you've been quiet all evening, and I had to raise the moon and stars for you." Luna's head droops, "sorry Tia. Me and Flash have been talking business. I lost track of time." Celestia smiles, "Luna it's ok. It must be important if you lost track of time." After a while Celestia continues, "the chefs have prepared our dinner, would you like to eat in here or..." "Out there. Iv finished my business for tonight." Luna quickly replies. The two sisters head to the Dinning room. Suddenly a letter appears in front of Luna, Luna reads it silently, 'Dear princess Luna, sorry if I'm interrupting anything, but I was wondering if we could discuss a matter on Thursday or Friday, from P. Twilight.' Celestia sighs, "was that Flash." Luna shakes her head, "no it was twilight. Just wanting to have a meeting with us on Thursday or Friday." Celestia nods, "ok, tell her Thursday. As we have mother an daughter time with mother on Friday." Luna nods an sends the letter.

The two sisters finally reach the dinning room and sit to eat. After they finish Luna says, "that was the best dish you've made so far chef." The chef bows, "thank you your majesty." The two sisters go into the lounge and sit in front of the fire. Suddenly the fire turns pink, "Discord, when did you get back from The Crystal Empire." Celestia says without moving. "How did you know it was me princess." Celestia chuckles, "who else would change fire into a kooky colour that is there best friends colour." Discord sits down next to them, "darn you know me to we'll Princess." Luna stares into the pink flame as it slowly changes back to its normal amber colour. Discord looks at Luna, "Princess Luna, are you alright." Luna doesn't reply or shift her gaze from the fire. Discord and Celestia exchange puzzled looks. Discord snaps his finger am turn himself into fire to blend into the fire in the fireplace, "Luna, what's on your mind." Luna responds, "Oh, Hi discord. I'm just pondering over plans me and flash have made." Discord nods, "oh, ok. I thought I put you in a trance by mistake." Luna smiles, "na, I'm good." Discord returns to his normal form and sits back down beside Celestia. Luna looks at them, "I think I might go for a fly alone." Celestia nods, then Discord says, "why not have a guard with you, I can make it so he can't hear you unless you address him." Luna smile, "thanks, but no thanks." And then she flies of into the night.


Luna lands in the royal garden, she sees animals crowding something, she walks over and finds Fluttershy unconscious, "what happened" a beaver responds, "grunt? Squeak, sniffle, grunt." Luna replies, "I don't understand sorry." The beaver face palms. Then acts out hitting head on a tree then laying still. Luna nods, "oh. I'd better take her home." And with that she puts Fluttershy on her back and flies her to her cottage.

As Luna glides down in front of Fluttershy's cottage she hears Fluttershy murmur , "calm... Down... I mean... No har...." She quickly takes Fluttershy to her room. As she goes to leave Fluttershy says, "Princess. What are you doing here... What am I do-doing here." Luna walks to her bedside, "I found you unconscious in the royal garden. What happened." Fluttershy replies, "I was Flying with a owl who was learning to fly. Then I saw a pony he was aggressive. I try-tyried to calm him but he knock-knocked me into something hard. And now here I am laying in my bed." Luna asks, "do you remember what the pony looked like." Fluttershy touches her head and winces in pain, "no sorry." Luna nods, "I must be going I'm sorry. Do you want me to get some pony." Fluttershy nods, "could you get rarity." Luna nods as she leaves.

Luna knocks on Rarity's door, Rarity opens the door, "oh hello princess." And bows, "what pleasure do I have with you." Luna replies, "Fluttershy has asked for you." Rarity nods, Luna continues, "and while I'm here I am in need of a dress." Rarity's eyes gleam, "come in Princess and I will jot down what you want and what fabrics." Luna nods and enters Rarity's home. "Is like the dress to be stylish... As all your dresses are, silk lined, and have enough room to dance in." Rarity nods as she puts her feather down, "an when is the dress needed by." Luna responds, "by Saturday night... Sunday morning at the latest." Rarity nods ok, I have just the dress for you." And walks Luna out, then races off to Fluttershy's cottage

Luna flies back to the castle, one of the guards says, "Celestia has gone to bed but wanted me to give you a message." The guard clears his throat, "Celestia wishes for you to raise the sun tomorrow and on top of that on your bed is a scroll with a message from Flash on it." Luna nods and heads to bed, she reads the scroll, 'dear Luna,
Daisy reminded me of mother daughter day on Friday. Hope you have fun, oh and please don't tell nana about me being royal now, I want to tell her... If she hasn't already herd.
From, Flash.' Luna smiles. Then goes and raises the sun.
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Sorry for the long wait I'm starting the new chapter as Iv been in polytechnic for 1 week now
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on February 23, 2014
Yes please update :)
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on January 27, 2014
AMAZINGNESS IS HAPPENING
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on January 27, 2014
In will add one chapter per day. Any requests will be added. Thank you
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on November 13, 2013
*sugh* ok Daisy you can do the mares party.
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on November 13, 2013
YAY, Flash this is awesome.. PLZ let me help with the story.. i can do the "girly" bits.
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ:-*
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on November 12, 2013
You'll be there. I fixed my phone so my stories will continue
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on November 11, 2013
The rings are bracelets for there hooves
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on October 06, 2013
Awesome! I'm the ring bearer! Wait, how are they supposed to fit those on their hoofs?
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on October 06, 2013
Sorry for yet another delay. My phone needs repair so I need to re right those chapters. Please bear with me.:">
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on September 23, 2013
This is a promace. I WILL UPLOAD THE NEXT CHAPTERS BY THE WEEKEND
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on September 19, 2013
its ok.
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on September 19, 2013
Oh ok thanks and sorry about what happened...
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on September 19, 2013
*worry
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on September 18, 2013
Also sorry for the delay with the story. I. Had some Health issues... But don't warty I'm al better now.
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on September 18, 2013
Also Aqua_Bubble if you wanna be in one if my stories there's also Warriors FanFic.
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on September 18, 2013
Well see, IV got a lot if ponies on the list, I'll see when I can add you
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on September 18, 2013
Wow this is a really good story is it possible if I could join? My name's aqua bubble and you can see my profile picture to see what I look like
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on September 18, 2013
Great story! And congratulations!
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on September 07, 2013
THIS BOOK IS SO FREAKING AWESOME WITH A CAPITAL!!
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on August 24, 2013
Pt 2 will be out tonight or tomorrow
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on August 24, 2013
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on August 23, 2013
Yes you may xXTwilight_SparklexX. Pm me your character
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on August 23, 2013
Can I join? That would be nice!
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on August 23, 2013
:) thanks can't wait for the next chapter &[]
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on August 22, 2013
It suits you.
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on August 21, 2013
btw i'm now blazing fire
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on August 21, 2013
I'M SO EXICTED :D
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on August 21, 2013
*sigh* ok. Your luck I haven't added blaze yet. I will make the change.
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on August 21, 2013
OMG I keep changing names but this one's final instead of blaze can I be called blazing fire? Everything else is the same
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on August 21, 2013
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