The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 6

I collapse with laughter as water comes out of the end, sprinkling his trousers.
"You threatened to kill me-with a water pistol?!"
"Hmpf."  
I roll around, giggling so much I don't think I can stop.
"You seem to be forgetting something. Death-drop? Or visiting me in jail with a few dead flowers and a box full of moldy chocolates."
"Actually, I think the second option sounds very tempting," I say with of course makes me giggle even more. He scowls at me so I shut up.
"Jump."
"Fine."
I pull myself down steadily, holding onto the drainpipe. "Er, you are coming too right? Plus, I'm feeling a bit dizzy-"
Before I could continue, he was down beside me."Ladies first."
I scowled and started pushing myself down. Then I heard a scream. A lady was down at the foot of the hotel, crying for the police.
"Police! Two children are stuck! Oh, get the fire brigade!"
I roll my eyes and cling onto the pipe, jumping from window sill to wall, windowsill to wall. I look up and see Scade still miles above me.
"Aren't you coming?" I call up.
"Did I ever mention my fear of heights?"
"No. That me be a slight problem."
"What?!"
I shrug and start my way down again.
"Aren't you going to help me?" he asked bewildered.
"No."
"What! That's not fair! I'm the one in charge! I'm the-" he missed his footing and slipped down, clinging onto my foot. I slip and we free fall, plummet to certain death.
"Aaargh!" I scream.
"AAAARRRRRGGGGHHHH!" Scade yelps. We fall, and bounce. "Huh?" Scade opened his eyes. We were bouncing back up again. Beneath us was a large trampoline, policemen crowded underneath it. "As we bounce!" Scade shouted to me. "Cling onto the windowsill and climb back up!"
"Why should I?" I shout back, enjoying the trampoline. "When you're the kidnapper?"
He frowns at me as if to say 'I wish I'd chosen someone else to kidnap'. I sigh although it is whisked away in the wind, whipping my hair in my face. I shake it away and clutch at a windowsill. Scade is still bouncing, looking a little worried.
"Don't worry," I grin, shouting the words so that the noise of the wind wouldn't drown me out. "It's no bad."
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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