The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 7

Scade squeezed his eyes shut as he leaps forward and clings onto the windowsill. My grip starts to slip, but he jumps in, sliding into the room with the window and pulling me in behind him. "We're going to the car," he says to me in a rush and grabs my elbow almost out of it's socket pulling me after him. "I can walk," I snap, shaking my arm free. As soon as we get there, he slams the car door shut, nearly chopping my leg off. "Where I we going?" I object.
"The 4 o'clock store," he says, accelerating and speeding off, going way above the limit.
"The 4 o'clock store? You've just been hanging from the top floor window of the tallest hotel and you want to buy a newspaper?"
Scade ignored me and parked in the car park, looking at me.
"I'm going to call your dad on that public phone with my demands."
I nodded quietly, diverting my eyes away but my upset expression disappearing immediately. "Can I buy some chocolate?"
He bursts out laughing.
"What?" I ask in annoyance.
"You've just been hanging from the top floor window of the tallest hotel and you want to buy chocolate?"
I roll my eyes and hold my hand out for  money. He shakes his head with laughter and hands me a five pound note. I grin back at him and dance off into the shop. The biggest packet of minstrels catch my eye an I squeak with delight. I watch Scade at the phone through the window and hold them up pointing to them. He grin and nods as I smile with amusement. I seem to be the only one in the shop, no one is at the counter. Then I feel a hand grab my shoulder and spin me around. I am face to face with a man who smells of cigars. I shriek as he pulls me into a headlock. "Scade!"
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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