The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 5

I woke to the sound of birds, singing their morning song. My feet find the cold floor and I patter slowly to the window, rubbing my eyes. A police car is parked and a huddle of police are inspecting the police car we stole.
"Scade," I hiss, throwing on my jacket and shaking him. I was glad I had slept fully clothed.
"Mmph."
"Are you awake?"
"I am now."
"Good. We need to go."
"Why?" he murmurs, rolling face first into his pillow.
"The police are inspecting the car."
"Great. That's cool, just gimme five more minutes."
I scowl at his back, pick up my own pillow and smack him over the head with it.
"Ow!"
"Come on!"
"I'm tired. Shut up and leave me alone."
I stomp into the bathroom and grab a jug of cold water. Without hesitation, I upturn it on his head, leaving him wet and angry. His teeth start chattering.
"What the heck was that?!"
"Get up!"
"Why?"
"Because the police are inspecting the flippin' car!"
"What the-" he jumps up in shock and stares out of the window. "Bloomin' heck they are as well!"
He grabs his gun and literally drags me out of the hotel room.
"Hello, how can I help you?" the receptionist smiles, her white teeth dazzling me.
"We're here to pay the bill," Scade says.
"Oh, okay. What's your name?"
"John and Sarah Smith."
"Okay, I'll be with you in a second." She walks off, her high heels clapping on the floor. We wait in silence as she types something into the computer and returns.
"That'll be forty  five pounds please."
"Sure. Can I just have a moment please?"
While Scade roots around in his pockets for some cash , I look around the lobby. Unlike our room, it was beautifully decorate, big plant pots, and spotless windows. My eye catches sight of something else as well, and it fills me with dread.
A man, no older that thirty is reading a newspaper...and my face is printed on the front cover. The words 'KIDNAPPED DAUGHTER-BELLATRIX GREENGRASS' are printed across it.
"Scade," I whisper.
"Yeah?"
"Look at the paper."
Scade takes his hand out of his pocket and looks around until his eyes rest on the paper.
"Oh turnips."
I don't bother to question his strange way of cursing. The police have spotted me and are running towards the door.
"Sorry, need to dash. Maybe I'll come back next week?" Scade says to the receptionist and without paying, pulls me with him back upstairs.
"Quick, out of the window," he hisses, giving me a leg up. I clamber outside and onto the roof over-looking London. I see the London eye, towering over buildings and I see the matchbox houses and the ant-like people.
"Now what?" I ask.
"Now we have to climb down. I'm thinking down that drainpipe-"
"What?! Are you crazy? You're kidding me right?"
"No. I'm serious. Look, completely straight face." He attempts at hiding his smile but I just catch a glimpse of it.
"Seriously. Now what?"
"I'm serious Bella."
"Flipping heck Scade! That's a death-drop!"
"Well, it's either this or jail."
"Yeah, jail for you. Not me. Maybe I'll visit you."
In a matter of seconds his gun is trained on my temple and my heart nearly stops.
"I'm not going to jail." His eyes are full of danger.
"Go on then."
"What?"
"Shoot."
"Okay."
He won't do it. I know he won't.
"You won't do it."
"How do you know?"
"I just do."
"I can't let you escape Bella, you have to help me."
"How can I help you if I'm dead? Just go kidnap another rich girl, I don't mean that much to you. Just another victim."
"Stop it!" Scade says angrily. "Maybe you're right."
"Shoot," I say, my eyes twinkling. "I dare you."
"But-"
"Go on. Or are you a chicken?"
His hand shaking, his finger right on the trigger. And then he fires.
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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