The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 10

Scade's point of view:

I watch Bella asleep, her lashes flickering slightly. I take a deep breath. "OK, I swore to myself that I'd tell you and I think whilst you're asleep would be the best time. It's just that, whilst I've been with you in these five days, I've started feeling differently about you. I mean, just thinking about you singing in the car demanding food when I first kidnapped you, I thought you were an annoying spoilt brat. But, now, I just feel like- like," I stuttered slightly. "Well. I'm glad it was you I kidnapped. And I'll just come out with it now. I-I think I'm falling in lo-"
I was put off when Bella's cheek muscles started twitching. Then a smile formed on her face and she burst out laughing, causing me to jump out of my skin.
"How long have you been awake?" I demanded furiously, as she giggled her head off.
"Since the spoilt brat part."
"Great."
She giggled again, so I cuffed her head lightly. Then her smile faded. "We're here," she said quietly. It may have just been me, but did she look miserable? I jumped out of the boat, hearing Bella's black buckle boots land hard on the tarmac beside me. I turned to face her.
"Remind me which warehouse I'm in," I asked. "You wrote them down right?"
"Yeah." She took a deep breath and closed her eyes as if making a decision. "You're in the one with the chimney."
"Are you sure?" I asked, reaching out for the paper in her hand. "I'm sure that-"
"I'm sure," she snapped, stuffing the paper in her pocket away from me. I nodded slowly.
"So," I said. "Go on."
"I don't want to."
"What?" Was she crazy?!
"I want to stay with you."
"I don't think-"
"So you don't want me?"
"No! No, it's just hard for me to-"
"You don't want me."
"I need this money, Bel."
"Don't call me Bel," she said furiously, heatedly, her eyes ablaze with anger. What had I done? "Goodbye."
"Bella! Come back here!" I followed her, watching in confusion as she hoisted herself over the massive brick wall separating the warehouses from the old fields. I jumped up after her. We were standing so high, the full moon literally beside us.
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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