The search for paradise

The search for paradise

He leant in further, his minty breath fresh. "This is what I'm going to do. I'm going to steal you." My heart fluttered. Why didn't I hate him? This fairy-tale had gone all wrong...

published on November 01, 2012not completed

Chapter 9

Bella's point of view:

"Did you call him?" I asked, as Scade walked over to me, his expression grim.
"We're meeting him in the warehouses by the old fields. The one next to the lamppost I'll be in, ready to give him the money. The one with the unused chimney you'll be in, so he can pick you up."
"Aren't the warehouses on the other side of the river?"
"Yes, we'll have to steal a boat."
"Is that a hobby of yours, stealing? Cars, boats, money...rich girls."
He glared at me and then gestured for him to follow me. "Come on. I want to be there before dark."
I nodded relentlessly and followed him into the dock.
"There's no one here," he sighed with relief when he got there. "Great. Come on, help me lift this one."
"We  can't, it's tied to the rack. We'll have to get one in the water," I explained tiredly. He stared at me with frustration.
"Could you stop acting like you're the kidnapper?" he muttered.
"Could you stop acting so stupid?"
His eyes narrowed so I shut up. I trailed behind him as he walked to the dock.
"There's no boats, they're either all in the harbor or on the river," Scade groaned. "Wait, look. There's two fellas over there, we can just knock em off before they get too deep."
"What?" I asked in horror.
"You heard me. Come on." He followed the boat and jumped in, pulling me in behind him.
"What's going on?" one of the men asked in shock.
"Nothing. Our boat has been stolen, so we wondered if we could ride along with you," Scade lied effortlessly, smiling innocently.
"Oh, okay," the man smiled, reassured, however the other man still looked suspicious.
"This is my sister, Lily," Scade continued, enjoying the lies. "And I'm Elliot."
I glared at him. He shut up.
"Orlando, turn on the radio," the suspicious man asked. Orlando nodded and pressed the button. He turned the volume up and fiddled with the small knob until the signal was fixed.
'Bella Greengrass is still missing, her family sending out pleas for the kidnapper to return her home.' The stupid radio. I looked at Scade horrified. "Could we change the channel-" I started indiscreetly.
'We are now offering out a reward of £50000 for whoever happens to find this girl. She has brown curly hair, usually tied in a ponytail-' I pulled my ponytail out quickly as Scade motioned. '-And was known to be wearing black skinny jeans and a checked red, blue and white shirt." Scade shoved his jacket over my jeans. The two fishermen looked at each other in doubt, disbelief and then triumph. Before they were knocked out of the boat by Scade.
"See you around, fishers," he called after the swearing men with glee. "No one is getting that £50000 but me! ME ME ME!" He smirked and picked up the radio, starting to go a little too far. "And you can take your crappy radio with you!"
I had to push him out of the way and stuff his jacket in his face to shut him up. "You are unbelievable," I mutter as he chortles with glee.
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Amazing, as per use:)
I hope you continue soon!
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on October 09, 2013
So sorry for the massive delay, I've had so much schoolwork and stuff going on, I will try and get back to it as soon as possible!!
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on July 16, 2013
More more amazing amazing more more I like scade please tell why scade is really selling Bella?
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on May 28, 2013
More more more more moreeeeeee, msg me when u write more! plz x
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on April 08, 2013
My face character is Bella...
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on April 08, 2013
so so so talented
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on April 07, 2013
(My fav character is Scade too XD)
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on March 12, 2013
Thanks XD
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on March 12, 2013
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!! I see your fuuuuteeeere!!!!! You are going to be a famous author!!!!! Btw I like Scade best.
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on March 12, 2013
Please write more! This is an awesome story and I was sucked into it!
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on February 13, 2013
Thanks :)
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on January 06, 2013
Very good, I agree-you could go places with this. You are a very good writer with a great idea
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on January 06, 2013
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on December 19, 2012
I love this, you should take it to a publishers!
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on December 17, 2012
Oh my gosh!!! Awesome story! I can't wait fir the rest!!:)
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
THIS IS AMAZING CLOVE YOU SHOULD GET IT PUBLISHED!!
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on December 04, 2012
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on December 04, 2012
EPIC!!!!!! :D
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on December 04, 2012
Love the ending!
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on December 03, 2012
Really detailed!
Great story. :)
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on December 03, 2012
Awesome! I loved it!
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on December 03, 2012
Sorry I haven't added a new chapter in years, I will soon!
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on November 27, 2012
This is good, very good.
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on November 17, 2012
Thanks!! :D
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on November 16, 2012
I agree with everybody but Potterpox- this is for actual comments, sorry and CatoandClove, well, not all good stories can be less than 3 paragraphs long......@Clove, this is awesome!! i love it! she loves him, he's scared and desperate... kidnapping... omg it's awesome!!!
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on November 10, 2012
Ooh. I didn't know where to stop the chapter, sorry!
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on November 02, 2012
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TO LONG OF A STORY
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on November 02, 2012
:D
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on November 02, 2012
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