Harry's..um...SISTER?!?

Harry's..um...SISTER?!?

Harry potter has no idea he has a sibling until vanessa strauss shows up and ruins the picture. What happens? read my story!

published on December 01, 2012not completed

Detention

“Have a seat Ms Feser, Mr. Potter, and Ms Strauss.” Umbridge started the detention with a leader like manner.
“MMMhmm,” Harry and Vanessa said.
“Wazzup Umbridge?” Tally said rudely in her usual manner.
“Potter, you will use my quill, and write 100,000 times, I will not tell lies. Ms Strauss, you will also be using my quill, and writing 100,000 times, I will respect the Ministry of Magic at all times. Ms. Feser, grab my quill this instant and write 100,000 times, I will respect my professor at all times, under any circumstances. Begin. NOW!”
Silently the threesome started to work. Soon Tally yet out a yelp of pain. Her hand was bleeding. Vanessa tried to contain her cries, and she could see her brother gritting his teeth, trying not to scream.
“You are dismissed.”
The three bleeding kids rushed out.
“Show me your hand, Harry.” Vanessa ordered.
Harry’s hand was bleeding horribly. “Tally, how’s yours?”
“Painful.”
“Oh my god!” Hermione came rushing toward them. “This has got to be illegal! I have essence of murtlap for you guys! Come on!”
Everyone crowded around Hermione’s bowl of potion, and soon they were all sighing of relief.
“We need to get Umbridge sacked.” Ron said.
“Now we’re talking.” Tally said. “I’ve got a plan.”
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I LOVE IT!:D
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on June 18, 2014
@cgkittymew got a problem with the parrot?
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on September 05, 2013
pretty good, but seriously a parrot?
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on September 04, 2013
@JKRowling, the problem was indentified before.
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on August 30, 2013
It's good but Professor Umbridge is the teacher when Harry is in the fifth year which means that Fred and George are in their seventh year. Sorry and I know its confusing but once you have it figured out you get it. Really good story
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on August 29, 2013
ah thanks you mentioned me:D
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on July 31, 2013
@JayFeatherLover thank you!!! ;)
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on July 23, 2013
I love this story! This is not hate, but just saying, they say happy Christmas, not merry Christmas, just informing you, cuz you wrote merry Christmas. But people are so mean to be hating on you for such a great fanfic. They're like "this would never happen!" or "this is not logical", well don't listen to them. IT'S A FANFIC! Since when do fan fictions seem like See More
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on July 23, 2013
I love this part, cu he IS crying when they save the universe!
"I mean, Harry’s the boy who lived, Ron the bravest person ever, and Hermione’s super smart! And look at you! A stupid, immature, dumb old IDIOT who thinks it’s funny to pick on kids who’ll save the FREAKING UNIVERSE WHILE YOU’LL BE CRYING LIKE A BRAINLESS PIECE OF THESTRAL DUNG!!!!!!!!!!"
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on July 23, 2013
BlackOrchird201, I never want to listen to you again. You are a DISGRACE, I repeat a DISGRACE to every Potterhead. Vanessa is OLDER than Harry, so Lily didn't die with her! And I have my dad's name as my middle name. Dumbledore split them up so Voldemort would never know about the power that the two of them had combined; the reason I never explained that is See More
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on July 14, 2013
THIS IS AN ABOMINATION OF EVERYTHING THAT J.K.ROWLING EVER WROTE WHEN LILY POTTER DIED SHE WAS PREGNANT BUT THAT BABY DIED WITH HER SO HARRY WAS AN ONLY CHILD SO THIS STORY IS NOT POSSIBLE AND BESIDES YOU DIDN'T EXPLAIN THE REASON WHY DUMBLEDORE SPLIT HARRY AND VENESSA UP AND ALSO WHY DID YOU GIVE VANESSA "JAMES" AS A MIDDLE NAME THA\T'S A BOY'S NAME SO THERE See More
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on July 13, 2013
Thanks chokolatlover! and np blank:)
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on July 08, 2013
Nice story, me like it!
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on July 08, 2013
Thank you, Infinite for acknowledging me! That so nice!
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on July 06, 2013
Thank you trassie for encouraging me! you were the first!:) aling with ur siss!
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on July 02, 2013
btw yaya FRENZY also says THANK UUUUUUUU but she has to do some hw rite now! hehe oh yea and btw me and frenzy r sis so yea! :)
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on June 28, 2013
AWWW TY INFINITE!!!! thank YOU for doing an AWESOME addictive story!!!! :D :p
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on June 28, 2013
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on June 20, 2013
LOVE IT AND PLEASE CONTINUE! You are awesome!
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on March 23, 2013
AWESOME!!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on March 22, 2013
Since when were u unwanted we lvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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on March 01, 2013
Yay!!:) group hug!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on February 28, 2013
Yay!!!! My friends like my best internet friends!! group hug!!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on February 28, 2013
Awww!! Don't think that!!! We all want you:D
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on February 27, 2013
You are AWESOME TOO!!!!!!!!!!! i thought i was unwanted!
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on February 27, 2013
Yeah, hermioneSJM!!!:) We need you!!!:)
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on February 27, 2013
:O wow u r AWESOME trassie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)))))
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on February 27, 2013
Not just me! All of us need u! :) ^.^
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on February 26, 2013
Thanks melzzz2000!!!!!!!! :)
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on February 26, 2013
Lol thanks trassie I didn't know you needed me :)
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on February 25, 2013
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