Can u check out my story "The Matchmaker?" I really like your stories and was hoping u could give me some feedback
NeonTiger
Ok! Sure I will :)
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What Genre is Divergent?
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Hello! Soz it took a while, but I updated my Odd One Out story! :D
on July 05, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to Odd One Out
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on July 05, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to Odd One Out
The Day
"Oh my gosh, I am so nervous!"
"You'll be fine!"
It's the day of the talent show, and I am on in two performances!!
"Oh no, they just ended!!!" I squeal in fright.
"It's ok! You'll be FINE!!"
"Now up is Kara performing a song she made herself called, 'I'm Still Wondering'
My legs shaking, I walk up on stage, my sparkly black costume glinting. There are millions of faces in front of me.
I get my pick out and do a practice strum with my guitar. Then I start to sing:
"Why didn't I see
That wh... Read Full Chapter
"You'll be fine!"
It's the day of the talent show, and I am on in two performances!!
"Oh no, they just ended!!!" I squeal in fright.
"It's ok! You'll be FINE!!"
"Now up is Kara performing a song she made herself called, 'I'm Still Wondering'
My legs shaking, I walk up on stage, my sparkly black costume glinting. There are millions of faces in front of me.
I get my pick out and do a practice strum with my guitar. Then I start to sing:
"Why didn't I see
That wh... Read Full Chapter
on July 05, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to Odd One Out
Talent Show
"Oh my gosh! Kara, look at this flyer!" Sage runs towards me, waving a poster in her hand. "It's for the school Talent Show!!"
"No way!" I say, folding my arms. "You know I have no talent!"
"H*ll yeah you do! You should sing!"
"You haven't even SEEN me sing or ANYTHING!"
"No, but I bet you're AWESOME! Sing something now!"
"What?!"
"Go on, sing something!"
"Okay..."
I sing the song we're learning in music. Sage listens, awestruck. At the end, she bursts into applause.
"It wasn't THAT great!... Read Full Chapter
"No way!" I say, folding my arms. "You know I have no talent!"
"H*ll yeah you do! You should sing!"
"You haven't even SEEN me sing or ANYTHING!"
"No, but I bet you're AWESOME! Sing something now!"
"What?!"
"Go on, sing something!"
"Okay..."
I sing the song we're learning in music. Sage listens, awestruck. At the end, she bursts into applause.
"It wasn't THAT great!... Read Full Chapter
on July 05, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to Odd One Out
Class
You walk with Sage to class.
"Looks like it's Art up first."
You run to the art room and go in. You sit next to a girl with short pink hair.
"Hey, I'm Sinya. You must be colored-eye-girl?" she smiles.
I hide my face in embarrassment. "Uh, yeah, you've heard that?"
"Yeah, Leona told me. But it's okay, I don't give a crap about it. You're fine."
"Really?" I look at her and smile.
"Yeah, in fact, I think it's really awesome!"
"Thanks!"
Sage comes and sits down next to me.
"Hey Sage!"
"Hey Si... Read Full Chapter
"Looks like it's Art up first."
You run to the art room and go in. You sit next to a girl with short pink hair.
"Hey, I'm Sinya. You must be colored-eye-girl?" she smiles.
I hide my face in embarrassment. "Uh, yeah, you've heard that?"
"Yeah, Leona told me. But it's okay, I don't give a crap about it. You're fine."
"Really?" I look at her and smile.
"Yeah, in fact, I think it's really awesome!"
"Thanks!"
Sage comes and sits down next to me.
"Hey Sage!"
"Hey Si... Read Full Chapter
on July 05, 2014
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Are you as crazy as me?
on June 29, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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"I...I can't!" you drop your weapon. Tristan sits up. He smiles. "And I can't either."
"So what do we do?"
"Well... The Hunger Games only end once you kill the other... But if we're BOTH dead..."
"You mean, we need to kill each other?"
"In a way, yes."
(Take-off of Katniss and Peeta's thing, I know, but I couldn't think of anything else!)
You hear a snarling sound and swing around. There is a Mutt standing right behind you. It lunges at you.
You hear Tristan scream. "_____!"
Pain all over yo... Read Full Chapter
"So what do we do?"
"Well... The Hunger Games only end once you kill the other... But if we're BOTH dead..."
"You mean, we need to kill each other?"
"In a way, yes."
(Take-off of Katniss and Peeta's thing, I know, but I couldn't think of anything else!)
You hear a snarling sound and swing around. There is a Mutt standing right behind you. It lunges at you.
You hear Tristan scream. "_____!"
Pain all over yo... Read Full Chapter
on June 29, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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You raise you weapon. "I am so sorry..."
He puts his hands up. "I understand."
You look away, attack, and then, when all is silent, look back.
Tristan is dead.
You feel guilt well up in you, overwhelming you.
A beam shoots down on you, and you disappear back into the world.
You have survived the Hunger Games, but the guilt almost drives you mad. Read Full Chapter
He puts his hands up. "I understand."
You look away, attack, and then, when all is silent, look back.
Tristan is dead.
You feel guilt well up in you, overwhelming you.
A beam shoots down on you, and you disappear back into the world.
You have survived the Hunger Games, but the guilt almost drives you mad. Read Full Chapter
on June 29, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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"Sorry Tristan, but I can cope on my own." you say, and turn away from him.
"Okay," he says sadly.
You wander through the bush and scrub, gathering food. You are about to pick some berries when you hear something.
BANG!
You jump and drop everything. Suddenly streaks of black swarm around you. Mutts! They could kill you!
You run as fast as you can, and climb a huge tree to evade them. You gasp as you hear a voice behind you.
"Seriously? I only saw you about 30 minutes ago!"
It was Tristen... Read Full Chapter
"Okay," he says sadly.
You wander through the bush and scrub, gathering food. You are about to pick some berries when you hear something.
BANG!
You jump and drop everything. Suddenly streaks of black swarm around you. Mutts! They could kill you!
You run as fast as you can, and climb a huge tree to evade them. You gasp as you hear a voice behind you.
"Seriously? I only saw you about 30 minutes ago!"
It was Tristen... Read Full Chapter
on June 29, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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"I'll come with you!" you say, and shake his hand.
"Great! Come on, if we're going to survive, we need to eliminate more of our opponents."
You nod and turn around, yelling, "Come on!" behind you. Tristan follows you into the wilderness.
You see a flash of colour and raise your weapon. Then you unleash it, but the enemy is quick too. He swings a broadsword at you. It misses, but unfortunately hits Tristan.
"No!"
He isn't injured much though, and he grips his katana and then, with a mighty ... Read Full Chapter
"Great! Come on, if we're going to survive, we need to eliminate more of our opponents."
You nod and turn around, yelling, "Come on!" behind you. Tristan follows you into the wilderness.
You see a flash of colour and raise your weapon. Then you unleash it, but the enemy is quick too. He swings a broadsword at you. It misses, but unfortunately hits Tristan.
"No!"
He isn't injured much though, and he grips his katana and then, with a mighty ... Read Full Chapter
on June 28, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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You can't call out; it's way too risky. No, instead you hoist yourself up and try to stand. You can - but not very successfully. You walk over to a bush and start picking random berries from it. You are about to eat them when you hear someone.
"Stop! Don't eat those!"
You pause and look who it is. It is a boy. He stops beside you, panting.
"Don't eat them, their poisonous!"
"They are?!" you drop the berries.
"Yeah! Listen, I'll go get you something to eat. And something for your leg, too."
... Read Full Chapter
"Stop! Don't eat those!"
You pause and look who it is. It is a boy. He stops beside you, panting.
"Don't eat them, their poisonous!"
"They are?!" you drop the berries.
"Yeah! Listen, I'll go get you something to eat. And something for your leg, too."
... Read Full Chapter
on June 28, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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You need to cry out!
"HELP!" you yell desperately. "PLEASE, HELP!!"
You hear leaves snap behind you. You turn, wincing, and see a boy.
"Whoa, what's happened?" he runs up to you.
"Crossbow wound."
"Ow!" he winces. "Don't worry, wait here a sec."
He runs off and you wait for him, growing impatient. He comes back 5 minutes later. "Listen," he explains, "This is a combination of different juices. It's going to help the wound, but it might sting, okay?"
You nod. Tristan breathes deep and then rub... Read Full Chapter
"HELP!" you yell desperately. "PLEASE, HELP!!"
You hear leaves snap behind you. You turn, wincing, and see a boy.
"Whoa, what's happened?" he runs up to you.
"Crossbow wound."
"Ow!" he winces. "Don't worry, wait here a sec."
He runs off and you wait for him, growing impatient. He comes back 5 minutes later. "Listen," he explains, "This is a combination of different juices. It's going to help the wound, but it might sting, okay?"
You nod. Tristan breathes deep and then rub... Read Full Chapter
on June 28, 2014
NeonTiger added a new chapter to The Hunger Games - Will YOU Survive?
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You don't want to go in. It might be a trap. Instead, you start gathering supplies. You find vines and some logs and then build them into a remote shelter. It is all going well until you hear a voice.
"Hey!"
You drop the wood and swing round. There is a boy standing there, about your age. He grins. You gasp and grab your weapon.
"If you come any closer, I swear I will..."
"I won't! Don't worry! I'm Tristan! Pleased to meet you!"
You lower your weapon. "Um... Hi?"
"What's your name?"
"I'm ___... Read Full Chapter
"Hey!"
You drop the wood and swing round. There is a boy standing there, about your age. He grins. You gasp and grab your weapon.
"If you come any closer, I swear I will..."
"I won't! Don't worry! I'm Tristan! Pleased to meet you!"
You lower your weapon. "Um... Hi?"
"What's your name?"
"I'm ___... Read Full Chapter
on June 28, 2014