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@JackieTheHedgehog When will you announce the winners?
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I am judging them now as we speak, but you've got till the top of the hour for last minute submissions.
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150 followers!!! Thank you to all of you!!!!!!! I can't believe it :D
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Yippee!!
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Hey--- You're doing a great job at reviews. Your notes are spot on. Keep doing the good work!
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my pleasure
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Thank you!
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Yea, definitely, admittedly I was a little afraid to tell people the whole truth as I can be harsh sometimes but you have worded it in a constructive way and I wanted to commend you for it. If you keep up the good work I may make you my right hand man ;) Good luck and Good writing!!!
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Thanks! That means a lot!
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Thanks for the follow :)
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I updated my story :D
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I wrote more New Girl! :D :) ;) :P
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Hi JeweledOwl---

You have requested membership to my page Editor and Reviser. You requested to be an editor [I assume grammatical editor if not please say so] and a reviser. So to be a grammatical editor you must take my quiz "Are You a Grammar Nazi?" and to be a reviser please review my story "My poetry." Get back to me and we'll talk.
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So for grammar what English Level are you at?

The review was good but it should be a little lengthier, people like reading about themselves but I did take your advice which proves you have done what was requested of you. Please just do one more review of a story of your choosing and we'll go from there.
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Are you a grammar nazi?: 9/10
My Poetry: I loved your poetic voice, and also the describitons and descriptive words. However, some of the chapters aren't exactly poems (notably Night Is Bright), but short stories. To make them more "poem-y" you should try to add rythmn.
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Elleyd
what was your score on the quiz? And I need your review of "My Poetry."
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So...can I be a member now?
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I've passed "Are you Grammar Nazi" and read "My Poetry" already. And I would mostly like to be a reviser
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http://www.givesmehope.com is a beautiful sight where people share small stories that gave/give them hope in life. Check it out.
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OMG I am a huge fan of Harry Potter! Would you read my story. It's called The secret Hogwarts students
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yay! and let me know what you think!
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Awesome! Lemme read it!
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Please check out my story at http://www.qfeast.com/story/YWprPl/A-Week-In-the-Life
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A Week In the Life
A Week In the Life
Dive into a normal week for six eighth graders. Actually, I lied. Nothing about this week is normal, because Friday is the 8th grade dance! Peek into the perspectives of Avery, Emma, Lexi, Aaron, Cliff, and Ian! Updates every day!
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MUFFIN-NISH!! XD
Muffin!
Muffin!
You are a muffin! You don't care much about your looks or anything and are kind and caring. You are intelligent and a fantabulous friend to all. Muffins are delicious and loved by all, just like you :).
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