The Lady of My Lake

The Lady of My Lake

When, Orphellia's heart is broken she finds herself returning to her hidden lake. Once she reaches the water, though, she experiences a ghost encounter that will change her course of fate.

published on July 28, 2014not completed

Returning Home

Returning Home I pulled myself out of the water and sprinted through the forest. "I must be hallucinating." I gasped replaying the scene in my head. My head was foggy and my sight obstructed by tears. I felt myself fall to the ground. Scrambling to my feet, I got up and continued running. It felt like the longest run of my life. Finally the trees loosened and I could just see the edge of my neighborhood. Looking around, I took a moment to catch my breath before continuing my run to my house. When I got there, I fumbled with the keys but finally got my shaky hands to drive the key in and open the door. "Dad! Dad!" I yelled as soon as I was in the house.
"Phi, what are you doing?" Jared said standing. He looked me up and down. "What happened to you? You're soaking and bleeding!" He took off his headset and approached me.
"No, Jared!" I yelled pushing him back. "Where's Dad?"
"He's still at work. Orphi, we gotta get that cleaned!" He said motioning towards my ripped up knee.
"We'll worry about that later! There was a woman! Someone shot her and and she had a baby and she drowned!" I yelled my hands waving by my head.
"Orphi! Orphi! Relax!" Jared said shaking me. I melted into his arms and he held me awkwardly. My brother was a loving guy but he was also socially awkward so I was already impressed with his compassion in this situation. He led me to my room and sat me on my bed. He said something along the lines of "Just wait here, I'll be back." But my brain was already processing too much to catch his exact words. I took a breath and tried to "put away" all the thoughts. I laid down on the bed and closed my eyes. I soon drifted off into an uneasy rest that was soon ended by a re-watching of the scene. When I shot up in bed, my knee had been bandaged and the pain had started. I dragged it out of the bed and dragged myself to the window-seat and looked out to the lake. It was calm as if nothing had ever happened. There was a knock on my door.
"Come in." I said quietly and didn't look at the door as it creakily opened. My father stood on the threshold.
"Ophelia, are you ok?" He said gently. He took a step in and closed the door. I shook my head, my voice failing me. "What happened?"
I was about to tell him about the woman and the lake but I remembered the first bad thing that happened today that sent me to the lake. "Ian cheated on me." I sighed.
"Oh, honey, I'm sorry." He hugged me and I immediately felt better. Ian was my favorite boyfriend and finding out he cheated on me was a crushing blow. "Is that all?"
"Is that not enough?" I mumbled. Dad looked down obviously feeling bad. "There was something else... I went to the lake and ther--"
"You went to the lake at this hour?! No wonder you got hurt!" My dad didn't mind me going to the lake but ever since mom disappeared at night we have strit curfews and are not to leave the house after 10 without express permission. He scowled at me. "You know you're not supposed to go out there after 10!"He stood and I could tell he was angry.
"Dad, but--"
"No 'but's.' Go to bed, Phi." He stood and grabbed the doorknob. "I love you, Phi. Good night." I nodded at him and he closed the door. I spent the rest of the night looking out the window.
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.......O.O Whoa that ghost was realistic
Favourite boyfriend? She has more than one???
Like the name :) and the socially awkward brother reminds me of Simon. CONTINUE. OR ELSE. (No just kidding, but it would be cool to finish and see where it goes :D)
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I'll try!
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XD
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on August 15, 2014
Just thought eh, it wouldn't be that devastating a blow if you're cheating on him too....
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on August 15, 2014
Got you :)
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on August 15, 2014
no she has had ones before and she loved this one the most xD
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on August 15, 2014
She has more than one bf?
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on August 15, 2014
And you said I was a good writer? Elleyd take a look at yourself! This is AMAZING, see when your older, if you want to be a writer or something to do in the story-writing business I will be definitely be reading your books! This is phenomenal, you really have talent here. :)
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Thank you! I do plan on publishing books and being an author but that's not my main job. Thank you though!
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:D
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on August 15, 2014
Mhmm
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on August 15, 2014
knew that totALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLy knew that.
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on August 15, 2014
Stardolls a game lol
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on August 15, 2014
lol Night ;) but who's Stardoll?
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on August 15, 2014
Night hun ;)
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on August 15, 2014
I know. People do that on stardoll and you're like what the hell?
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on August 15, 2014
it's freakin me out.
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on August 15, 2014
Lmao okk
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on August 15, 2014
I swear I am not ElleyDbackup I do not know who that is...
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on August 15, 2014
No, they would make accounts to get themselves 'famous'. Idk. Well im not sure, maybe some people do think ur famous, I guess you kind of are lol
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on August 15, 2014
What? Someone thought I was famous on Qfeast?
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on August 15, 2014
Idek, read your one stories to think ur like 'qfeast famous'. Ik someone that did that once o-o
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on August 15, 2014
what would u even do with a second account?
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on August 14, 2014
yea that's what i thought
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on August 14, 2014
Lol same but theres no point really o-o
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on August 14, 2014
haha xD i thought about making another but i didnt
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on August 14, 2014
Cuz id have to know them lol xD
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on August 14, 2014
Good ;]
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on August 14, 2014
Nah
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on August 14, 2014
lol yh xD Wbu? you got any other ac's on here? ;3
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on August 14, 2014
prob a good thing xD
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on August 14, 2014
Moviestarplanet lol, this is my one and only acc on here xD
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on August 14, 2014
here? or other places?
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on August 14, 2014
Oh, you think that's a lot? I used to have coolcass22, Nawww, Vitalia, SkippingCarrot, 10cassie and tons more ahah
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on August 14, 2014
wow u have a lot of accounts xD
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on August 14, 2014
Yuup, and Lostsoul</3 (it was fashionable at the time >.>) & Social casualty
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on August 14, 2014
oh cool :3
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on August 14, 2014
wait no, that's my old account lol, its actually Cas:3
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on August 14, 2014
Geez, u try to get a username on there xD
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on August 14, 2014
Rested? xD Ok!
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on August 14, 2014
Oh cool, if u remember it lol add me please, My user is Rested
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on August 14, 2014
i used to i still may
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on August 14, 2014
You probably don't..but do you have a moviestarplanet account?
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on August 14, 2014
;D
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on August 14, 2014
haha ;D
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on August 14, 2014
lol true xD
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on August 14, 2014
Well Iggy's not mine ahah
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on August 14, 2014
Drop this and let the whole world feel it ;D My song lyrics xD
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on August 14, 2014
C:
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on August 14, 2014
ok c;
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on August 14, 2014
i'll ask :3
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on August 14, 2014
Oh, ok.
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on August 14, 2014
I don't remember y she stopped i'll ask her.
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on August 14, 2014
Its a shame she didn't carry on, I wish I had that job.
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on August 14, 2014
Yes she did quite a bit
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on August 14, 2014
Oh Really? Did she enjoy it?
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on August 14, 2014
My mom was a journalist for a while.
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on August 14, 2014
My pleasure, I'd either like to be a journalist or an author, something in that business.
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on August 14, 2014
Awesome Amazing Wonderful Phenomenal!
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wow nice vocab xD thanks!!!
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:D
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on August 13, 2014
Amazing!
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aw thank you :">
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:)
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on August 06, 2014
i'll try
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on August 06, 2014
Write more soon :)
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on August 06, 2014
Amazing writing! This is super good
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Thanks! :D
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on August 01, 2014
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on August 01, 2014
Faboo
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Thanks :3
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on July 28, 2014
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