Insanity (1)

Insanity (1)

This is my shot at making a creepypasta. Tell me if you enjoyed ^_^" "It's not my fault..."

published on July 27, 2015not completed

Mysterious Man

While in my slightly sane state I felt pressure relieve off my chest with every tear that fell.

'I don't want to be the way I am...I'm scared and I want to cuddle...I want to hug it away...I want to be happy...'

I fell to my knees on the ground then leaned against a tree, hugging my knees as I cried...wept rather.

Then I had heard a slight gasp from an unknown figure.

I didn't bother look up, I just wanted to be alone.

Although...I wanted to be comforted...

"Why are you crying," I heard a deep voice ask.

I shook my head as I kept my face in my knees.

"You look about 13...what's a kid like you doing out this late alone in the woods," he asked.

Again, I shook my head.

"Are you...13," he asked yet again.

I shook my head once more, "if I tell you...you'll tell them."

"Tell who," he asked coming closer to me.

I quickly stood and pinned him against the tree with a knife up to his jugular vein, "does this answer your question?"

He chuckled, "you're pretty for a 13 year old."

"I'm not 13...I'm 17," I said bluntly not moving the knife, "and I'm surprised you haven't heard of me...if you were a victim then you'd be dead by now."

"Then why aren't I being killed," he asked with a smirk.

"I just finished my rounds...in other words, believe it or not, I'm exhausted physically and emotionally," I said rolling my eyes.

He chuckled, "what's your name?"

I then moved my knife and just leaned against the other side of the tree, "Scarlet... you?"

"That, my friend, is a secret," he said chuckling.

I didn't really look at his features...mostly because we were under the moon shadowed tree.

"That song...Mad World from Gary Jules right," he asked staring out.

"Yeah," I replied plainly.

"Ah...you're good at it," he said as I heard footsteps walk past me and into the darker shade of black in the forest, "see ya 'round Scarlet."

"Mmhmm," was all I replied as I stared out at the moon once more.

'Don't get close to anyone or you'll get hurt again...just like last time...'
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THIS STORY IS JUST TOO FRAKING GOOD! THE SUSPENCE THO
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Omg, AWESOME! NEW CHAPTERS WOO
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XD yus!! I've taken advantage of my writers block being gone for a while so ive been coming up with more ideas :3 i hope you enjoy them!! :3
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on August 22, 2015
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on August 22, 2015
Yay! Chapter 6 is out!!! But I always got that feeling that man could be Jeff... Idk Lol
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XD awesome!! Thank you!! X3 hmmmmm *sits in thinking beanbag staring at a lava lamp* hmmmmmm...
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on August 14, 2015
I would probably spend those 300 dollars on gaming stuff but Idk, And I would LOVE to help you with ideas! *Puts on thinking helmet* I'll tell ya once I get some ideas!
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on August 14, 2015
XD i was just thinking about who that guy can be...it's like having $300 to yourself and wondering what you can do with it first X) perhaps you could assist me in some ideas? Ill be sure to give you some credit for helping out if ya do :3
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on August 14, 2015
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on August 13, 2015
X3 awwww thank you!!! I've had writers block on what to write so far and it has been nagging at me XD (oh and chapter 10...ermahgerd... perfection!!!! X3)
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on August 12, 2015
XD yeah, thank you for the patience!! I've been thinking of all the possible routes I can take with this story X3 hehe
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on August 12, 2015
OMG OMG YAYAYAYA ITS OUT CH 5 IS OUT
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on August 11, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
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on August 04, 2015
This is awesome.
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Thank you!! I'm so happy it was enjoyable!! I've another story almost like this if you'd be interested (Eyes of the Shadows) ^_^ thank you for reading!! :3
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Your welcome :)
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on July 29, 2015
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on July 29, 2015
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on July 29, 2015
I love this! I'm not much of a HUGE Creepypasta fan much anymore, but I still enjoy the stories :)
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X) my top favorite is Jeff... *blushes lightl* hes...really cool ^///^
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on July 27, 2015
>XD fear the crazy!!! *flails arms weakly*
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on July 27, 2015
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on July 27, 2015
HehehehehEHEHHEHEHEHEHE XF
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on July 27, 2015
X3 oh Jeff, i drew your beauty and you took the picture...meh not fair Jeff!! ...youre still cool though X3
Oh my >X3 haha
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on July 27, 2015
XD JEFF YA A WIMP
Also on this pic; my month is Yandere >:33 <insane chuckling>
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on July 27, 2015
*Deep breath in then out* laughing jack is the only cool clown...Jeff can kill the others >:3 oh and i put up my drawings of everyone's (so far) Jeff ran away though so I'll have to draw him again XD
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on July 27, 2015
XDD <paps> shush XD Clam child.. Connect with UR inner clam XD
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on July 27, 2015
>XD exactly!!! The one clown that doesn't phase me is supposed to be scary but if i see a friendly (o.o not so friendly) im gonna have a panic attack and maybe hit the clown if possible and then pass out XD why brain?! Why!?!?! XD
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on July 27, 2015
XDD LEIK- IM FINE; I JUST HAVE A PHOBIA AND I DON'T LIKE CLOWNS; YET I LOVE LAUGHING JACK WHICH IS ANOTHER CLOWN! :D
Like- WAT
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on July 27, 2015
XD i know right? It even surprised my mom XD it's just something about those bright colors that get me is my guess...thats why i avoid people in real life, i feel threatened by them o.o but it's pretty weird huh XD
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on July 27, 2015
XD That's messed up XD (not u, the weird thing with L.J and other clowns XD) and yea! ~(•3•)~
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on July 27, 2015
They're both awesome X3 for some reason...i can look at laughing Jack and not have a problem...but if i see one of those original clowns i will cry and shake and i will get violent soon after a few minutes of crying o.o but sure, I'll put some of my drawings in my photo thingy on my profile in a moment :3 (oh yeah, i also drew Doctor Smiley X3 )
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on July 27, 2015
Also, may I see some? :3
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on July 27, 2015
O yea I forgot I also love the Jacks XD
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on July 27, 2015
Me too ^_^ ive been drawing them X3 so far I've drawn BEN, Jeff, Slenderman, Clockwork, Sally, Ticci Toby, Eyeless Jack, and Laughing Jack :3
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on July 27, 2015
Same! But I also love the brothers, Sally, Clockwork, BEN, Toby, Smile Dog and many more
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on July 27, 2015
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on July 27, 2015
@MustacheMasterBoss I'm so glad you enjoy this!! :D it makes me so happy this story is so far off to a good start ^_^
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No problem! I've kinda miss having to love the pastas and fangirling over them ;) seb- aww the memories
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