Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

Let the games begin

Let the games begin Diamond's POV
Today is the day of the games.I'm nervous! I opened my dresser.I laid a pair of mint green sports top, with sweatpants,and pale purple running shoes. I took a shower.Silver had said yesterday that i didn't need to pack.Weird. I got changed and put a hair tie on my wrist. Sapphire, sonic,silver,and Amy were waiting in the car.
2 hours passed and we got there. I walked in and looked for my name on the desks. I finally found my name but, Lola wasn't there. The secretary looked up at me.
"You must be Diamond. I'm Starlet. Follow me to your dorm." I waved goodbye to my friends and followed Starlet. We went in and it was a small grey dorm.It had a bunk bed, a computer, and a desk.  I guess I have to share. "Well,Um, Mint will come and get you for training. Here is some more information on the games and such." She handed me a stack of folders. Starlet left. I looked at each folder. The door opened. I looked to see a neon pink cat,with her mint green hair up, and a short light purple dress. She smiled and waved at me.
" Hi,I'm your trainer , Mint. Yea,I remember this dorm. I had to deal with this for 4 years straight. So, you ready to start training?"
"Yea I guess.",I said.  I followed her outside. There was an obstacle course with a wall, weapons, some uneven bars, a track field, and more.It was muddy since it had rained hard last night.
"Ok,Diamond, to warm up I want you to..."  Training was exhausting! Mint made me run 4 laps, do push ups on the bars, and try to climb the wall. I was so tired last night. I went to my dorm. Starlet walked in.
"Here's some clothes for 4 days with shoes too. There's already soap in the locker room. And by the way,you need a shower!!",I smiled. I looked in the box,and there was a black dress,along with boots too. I went to the girls' locker room and there was a lot of girls in there. I found an empty shower at last.

Lola's POV
I was walking in the girls locker room and saw Diamond again. . I tried to kill her. I was so close!! I tried to peek in her shower stall. I only saw nothing. . I walked out side and flew to the roof. I peeked down bat,style and saw her stall to plan an attack with my knives. I stalked her a little bit. But, she threw soap at the window and pulled down a curtain. I flew of the roof and sat on a bench. I pulled a bottle of root beer out and drank it. Something stabbed my neck. I felt my neck.I touched something bumpy and square. I pulled it out. I wiped the blood off. It was a microchip!! I looked around and saw i was drinking root beer! I'm on medication I can't drink  root beer!! I probably stalked diamond!! I am not a killer.! Who did this? I flew to the girls locker room and saw Diamond walking out. I quickly flew out and caught up with her.
"Diamond,I can explain!",I said while flying.
"What do you want Lola?"
"Please 5 minutes."
"Fine!",she said as we sat on a bench inside. I sighed.
"Listen I'm sorry I tried to do that stuff.I was controlled by something. I can't drink root beer either."
"Is that why your acting like this.Unless,your a killer."
"No,I'm not that. I was controlled by a chip." Diamond believed me. We made up and shook hands.Now, I have to tell the starvation games headquarters that i can be Diamond's stylist.

Diamond's POV
Lola and i made up. I have been training hard. Today is part 1. Whatever that means. I went into the cafeteria. I saw Lunti with her friend.I sat down by myself next to an orange bunny. He was eating chips so loud! Anyways, a neon pink hedgehog, i think walked in the front of the room. She wore a pink and black puffy dress,and her blue hair was really puffy too. She wore a lot of blue makeup.
"I will pair you up for your dorms. Ok,first pair is.. Diamond,and Strike. Go to Diamond's dorm." I walked out of the room. Who's strike?
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
NO
STAHP.
THE DOUBLE SPACES See More
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 10, 2016