Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

SALLY vrs.SAPPHIRE

SALLY vrs.SAPPHIRE Sapphire's POV
I quickly get up.Sally gets these blue blades on her wrists.She comes running again.This time,i kick her and sends her flying to a wall. I fast walk over to her and slaps her. She pushes me off.Sally swipes her blue blade and hits my cheek.It burns like fire. My cheek is pink now. She hits me again this time in the chest. Now im angry. I run over to her and tackles her.I pinned her down and slaps her so hard,her cheeks are red. I punch her in the chest.Sally kicks me off and i go flying in the air.I hit my head off of there desk.Sally is over me.She swipes her blade across my face.It leaves a scratch. I kick her in the chest and she goes  across the floor.
I don't bother to get up. I here Sonic's voice. I pass out.

Sonic's POV
I scoop Sally up and put her on a medical cart bed. A nurse comes and takes her away.I run over to Sapphire.  I then scoop her up onto a medical bed. I follow the nurse. We go outside the building.We walk over to the hospital nearby. Hours later...................................
I go and visit Sapphire.I find Diamond,and Amy there talking to her. "Hey,can you guys go outside for a while?"
"Sure thing,Sonic",Amy says while winking.Diamond justs shrugs and follows.I sit on the bed next to Sapphire. "What happened Sapphire?"
" I was fighting with Sally."
"Why were you fighting?"
"Over someone."
"Who?"
"You." My eyes narrowed.
"Why?!"
"You kissed me.I didn't think you already had a girlfriend Sonic.Why did we kiss,if you had a girlfriend?"
"I don't know. I just had to.I love you Sapphire."
"I love you too Sonic."   After that, I went to Sally"s room.I took a breath. I have to break up with her... I don't want to break her heart though.
"Hey,Sal."
"Hi,Sonic."
"You ok?"
"Yea, I guess."
"Um, Sal i have to talk to you."
"Yes, Sonic, what is it?"
"We have to break up.I'm sorry Sal."Her eyes narrowed.
"Why?!",Her voice raised.
"I have feelings for someone else."
"Oh, really. Who then?"
"Um, I rather not tell you,Sorry Sal."
"Sonic!! Do you hear what Your saying!! We love each other!!",She had tears in her eyes.
"We did love each other,but i don't feel the same way with you."
"Fine then!! I don't care!! I'm getting back together with ken!!" I turned to walk away.
"Wait,Sonic!" I turned around. She got out of the bed.
"We can at least share a kiss one more time." I nodded I grabbed her waist and we kissed. Sally got close to my ear.
"Sonic,if things don't work, I'll be there. I love you." I walked out of the room. I stopped by the door. Sally was crying a river. I looked through the little hole in the door knob.She was on her knees. I seen her covering her eyes.Tears were dropping on the floor.
"Sonic,Why!! Why!! I LOVED YOU!! ", i heard her scream through tears.

Diamond's POV
I went to Sapphire's room with a tray of grilled cheese, an apple,and a cola.  
"Hey,Sapphire here's your food."
"Awe, thx Diamond." I set the food down. I smiled.It was 9:45,already." As we were walking,were heard screaming.
"Hey saph I'll brb.Can you wait 10 minutes please?"
"Sure thing." I peeked through the hole and saw Sally on her knees crying.I opened the door.I bent down and patted her back.
"What's wrong Sally?"
"S-SONIC BROKE UP WITH ME!!"
"It's ok Sally. Sonic is dumb and foolosh to dump a girl like you.You don't need him."She sniffed
"You think so?"
"Of course." She smiled and we got up to opur feet.
"I guess i just need a root beer.Thanks so much."I smiled.
Sapphire and i finnaly got to there house.It was huge! We walked in. All the boys were chilling on two long black leather couches.Silver smiled at me.I blushed and waved.
"Follow me to your room.",Sapphire said. We walked up to my room. My room was next to Silver and Knuckles' room. I walked in and found Rouge sitting on a fluffly white long couch with a cola and a small bottle of medcicne.
"Hey,Diamond." I smiled and waved. I opened a door in this room to my room.A room in a room! I was shocked.I had a mint green and white striped bed.Everything was put away neatly,even my clothes!! I had a small white wooden desk.There was two slide open doors to the balcony. I went to the balcony. Oh, how pretty the site was!! I looked over and seen Sally walking to a place. I went back inside and decided i needed to change. I took a short sleeved light blue blouse and black yoga pants. I put my medium length hair up. My blouse had strings and a big purple bow in the middle. I put a black bow bandana, with white polka dots on. I walked down stairs.

Silver's POV
Diamond walked downstairs and sat next to me. I blushed and smiled.She had changed.Diamond looked so different!! a good different! I offered her a cola.She smiled and took it up to her room. I wonder what room she's in.I hope its mine! I mean it would be cool!!
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
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THE DOUBLE SPACES See More
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 10, 2016