Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond the hedgehog ( Re-Write coming soon)

Diamond is a princess of Orcia( Or-see-ya). There's an attack and has to leave the kingdom with some freedom fighters. They ask her to join but, another evil group asks her to join too, while kidnapping her. Will she choose good, or die? Can she save Orcia? Can she protect herself?

published on June 09, 2016not completed

My brother?

My brother? Silver's POV
I really didn't want Diamond to wait in the waiting room by herself.That was rude of Sally to do that. Well, lets see what Sally the stubborn chipmunk-oh oops squirrel wants. We all settled in a chair waiting for Sally to speak.Sally took a breath.
"I found more information about Eggman. I did some research with other agents.I found out that Eggman attacked uh-i forget the name of the kingdom.He attacked that kingdom because he was looking for someone.The princess.Princess Diamond. Eggman wants to capture her for some reason." My eyes narrowed.
"Why would he capture the princess?",Sapphire asked.Sally glared before speaking.
"We are still finding that out Sapphire."She said the word Sapphire like it was scum. What's her problem? I dislike Sally most of the time. Everyone were asking question,and making theories.
Diamond's POV
This dark brown and black hedgehog came inside the waiting room.Then another hedgehog with cream brown hair came in.Rouge sat down next to me.
"Princess,Diamond,long time no see."the hedgehog said.I frowned and tilted my head.How did he know my name?
"Sorry,Diamond,my fiance ment to say that he is your brother." Fiance? My brother?I never had a brother? I am really confused.She explained.I'll tell you. When I was born,I had an older brother.He is 5 years older than me.He's 22.And he's engaged with Nutmeg.Anyways,The queen now isn't my real mother.My mother got a warning saying if she didn't give up her crown to a relative, they would kill me if Vex and her didn't leave.So she left.My father is my real father.He didn't really marry my fake mom.They were well, roleplaying.So my real mother, Lydia, gave her crown to her cousin, Mary.I knew Mary din't love me.That's probably why she scolded me, never told me anything,and was kind of controling me like I was a puppet.

I got up and hugged Vex.He hugged me back too. Nutmeg smiled.She was really nice.Rouge was clapping, and tears were in her eyes.Rouge is funny.We all laughed.Nutmeg and Vex are getting married next friday. For there honeymoon,there going to Paris.Turns out, Vex is a freedom fighter.Nutmeg is an agent from .G.U.N.
Lydia, is living in a brick small,pretty,house in the woods. Lydia is only 40 years old. I'm going to surprise her at her birthday.

Sapphire's POV(Fan Pov)
I hate Sally Acorn. She asked me to talk to her in  private.Well,actually she told me to do that. She's rude to me.I don't know why.I didn't do anything? Did i? Everyone left.
"Listen,Sapphire.Im not sure what your trying to do.It won't work.You can not take my boyfriend,Sonic away from me. So stop or else." Sally said my name like i was scum of of the ground. She glared at me. I huffed.
"Ok, first of all I'm not trying to do anything to you. I bet Sonic is planning to break up with you!" I said to her. She clenched her fists and cracked her knuckles.I was not even scared by one tiny bit.
"Oh,really. I seen you two kiss before.Did you know how that made me feel? It was heartbreaking.I knew someday I'll get revenge on you for kissing my boyfriend." Next thing i know she comes running towards me. I quickly jump into the air.Sally runs into a wall and hits her head. I run and jump on her back.She gets me off and throws me on the floor. My head is spinning.
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Wait, she put her necklace-crown on top of her head?
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on June 06, 2018
Making an announcement! I'M RE-WRITING THIS STORY! THANKS! X3
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on July 15, 2016
Great story, dude.
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on July 06, 2016
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on July 05, 2016
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!<3 <3 <3
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Thank you so much! XD X3 :D
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on June 23, 2016
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on June 23, 2016
So me and Sonic are now...*blush* okay ^\\\\^ hehehe
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Not for long. HeheheheheB):D
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*gasp* okie XD
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 16, 2016
Yep :D
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on June 16, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
SCREW YOU AND YOUR DOUBLE SPACES.
I GIVE ON THIS
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THE DOUBLE SPACES See More
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:pHaha Lol Xd
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on June 15, 2016
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on June 15, 2016
Ok thx so much.
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No problem. ^-^
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ok @ breann.west.5 X3 :p
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on June 14, 2016
Actually, Lunti and Sunni are together. But if you want, you can pair them in your story. C:
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on June 13, 2016
is it ok if Lunti is with one of my characters i made?
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on June 13, 2016
Thanks! ^-^
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on June 13, 2016
That's amazing @breann.west.5
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Just finished. I'll upload it, hold on. ^_^
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on June 13, 2016
:x:-B:-B
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on June 13, 2016
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on June 13, 2016
Oh, um...If you like, I could do a redesign of her, so she's no longer a recolor...
And if you want, you could put one of my characters in there. Here they are...
-Lunti the Budgie (Lesbian)
-Sunni the Conure (Lesbian
-Karana Coyote (Straight See More
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on June 13, 2016
@love_sonackie
@sapphirethehedgehog
@swiftelementthedarkhedgewolf
I might use your characters
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Oh! Thank you! :D
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Have you read it? What do you think? ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
Thank you! And I know, I want to work on that ^.^U
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on June 15, 2016
I added your storie to my fav list!!!! :-B:D
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on June 15, 2016
:pB):D:)
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on June 15, 2016
Yea, Thx but ppl were complaining that she was a recolor
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on June 15, 2016
Diamond seems great too! I've seen at his in my recommend catogory a lot but never got the chance to read it, so finally being able to and seeing my charature in it is amazing! Thank you! :D plus we both have gem names :-O
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on June 15, 2016
yea love your character
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on June 10, 2016