Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 2016not completed

The Redeption

Her mother died first, slowly and painfully, and before she did, her mom said, "Why? Why would you do this?" She answered, "This is what I felt. The pain of being rejected. Everyday!" Then she died. Jordan felt nothing but happiness. She was almost free from her past. "Dad, you saw her die. Look!" She plunged th knife into her mothers heart. "Dead! Now it's you turn." The same actions pursued, and his last words were "I don't accept you being with my daughter." "It's not your choice! I love her!" And the knife struck his heart. Jordan looked at them. "Mother, Father, be free." She touched their bodies, and the blood was gone from their bodies. They were sacks of bones and meat. "Jeff, come here." He followed. "Thank you for doing this with me." Jeff nodded. She kissed him on the cheek. He moved his hand to her face. "I love you, Jeff." They kissed, and Jordan felt heaven. Someone coughed. They both took their weapons out and got ready to attack.
"Umm. I didn't mean to interrupt anything, but it's 1:00. If you want to take the bodies, we got to go." Jane stood by the doorway. "Fudge." Jordan mumbled. "Grab the bodies and go. Hurry." They ran out, or tried to. A sack of meat wasn't exactly light.
At about 3:00 am, they got to the house. "You can dump the bodies in my room. We go back tomorrow and raid the house. If you come or not, it's up to you." Jordan was ready to sketch her new body. "Oh, and we keep earlier to ourselves." She added. "Come over here." She went to her room, dropped the bodies, and asked Jane to help with the sketch of her new body. "Sure." "Oh, and can I eat?" "Umm. Try to chew with your mouth closed. But yeah!" She took an arm and began ripping of flesh with her arm and eating it. "I want my face to be covered by a hood, but I can take off if I want. If it's okay." Jane commented, "You just tell me, don't act nice. I'll tell you if Slendy can do it." After, she was done, the new body looked good. "Rest. You're not Creepypasta yet, you need rest." Jordan nodded, got into bed and fell asleep.
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I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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