Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 2016not completed

The Romance

"Jordan, you ready?" Jeff had his knives, and Jane was still getting ready. "Did you have to bring her?" "Yes. We need a time-keeper." He nodded. Jane came out front, ready. Slenderman was by the front, greeting them. "Keep the screams to a minimum, okay?" Jordan nodded. "Go on then children, go! I have hunting to do."

2 hours later---------

"We're here." Jane announced. Jeff got them in the house, and Jordan led them in to the bedroom. They were awake, watching TV. "Mom, Dad!" "Jordan! Are you okay?" Jordan was crying. She didn't want to waste time, and she put on a good show. "Mom, what time is it?" She checked her watch. "9:30" Jordan smirked. "Perfect. Jeff, Jane, Now." They almost screamed, but were knocked out by then. The two Creepypastas had hit pressure points, and they we're out.
When they were tied up in a chair, it was 10:00. They had all night to do this. But she wanted it to be painful for them. "Jane, can you go hunt? You know how EJ loves his liver." Jordan asked her. Of course this a was a nice way of saying "Get out." "Jack, you may stay. Hold down Father." He put his hands on his shoulders. "Wake them up." When they did wake up, Jordan had a knife, holding it in her hands. "You know about Creepypasta? Right? Well, here we go." She explained everything, and when they didn't believe her, she duck-taped their mouths. "Hi, I'm Jeff the Killer." Jeff announced. "I'm in love with your daughter." He stabbed the father in the arm. "You left her. I never will." Jordan pulled him toward her and kissed him, for show.
"You will feel my pain." She cut off her moms arm and tried to stop the bleeding. The more pain, the better. She faced her fathers chair toward her mom, so he could feel real pain. "Jeff, want to play a game? It's called Mirrors. What I do my mom, you do to my dad. Okay?" Jeff nodded. She stabbed her moms leg, and so did Jeff.
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I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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