Black Crow's Beginning

This is my Creepypasta OC, Black Roses, beginning. If I do something wrong, please don't yell at me... Enjoy!

published on January 15, 2016not completed

The New Body

Jordan was excited, today, she saw and maybe be getting her new body. After this, she would own a part of the forest, and never have to sleep again. Jane came in. "Come on! Get ready. The body is ready!" She got ready between 3-4 seconds and ran to the basement. Slenderman, for a Creepypasta worked fast. "I can get in it now, but it'll hurt. If you wait, it might not hurt as much." She thought, and remembered how she would remain the same, but be in a different body. The only thing that might be different is her hair. "Now." She said. Slenderman nodded. An ancient chant was said in different voices. Her spirit was lifted, and she landed in the body. "This is a new dawn! I am free from my past and will never be mortal again!" Everyone stopped. Jeff held her. "Try to walk." Slenderman ordered. She lifted her foot, put it down, and blacked out.
"Shh. It's me." Hoodie scared her, and EJ and LJ were directly in her face. They were holding her down. "Wh- agh!" The pain was excruciating. Slenderman came in.
"How is the patient?" He asked. Jordan wanted to slap him. "You need to stay in bed for a couple of hours. It'll help you heal. It's still only 12, so you will finish the job." He left, and Jeff came in. "Guys! Give her space!" They backed up. "She needs a- no wait. She doesn't." The five of them laughed. Jordan tried to lift her hand, but she only got halfway before Jeff stopped her. You need to rest." "But-" Jordan tried to get up again. "No! You'll hurt yourself. Please, don't." She gave up. "LJ, get me the 'item'." LJ did. "What's the it-" Her vision swam. "A syringe. See you at 3:00!" She fell out once again.
She woke up for a third time. No one was there but Slenderman and Jeff. "Can you stand?" She got up, and ached. Putting her foot on the ground, it didn't hurt much. The other foot went on the ground, and she stood up. "I'm not used to this! I need a hand!" She was losing her balance, fast. Jeff ran to her. "I got her, Slendy. Thanks!" He left. "You look different, but still great!"
Jordan wore a red cloak over a black armored jumpsuit. She had a belt to hold a sword, knife, and a pouch for food. She didn't need food, but it was good to eat it. She loved her new body, but was confused. Could she become one of them? TO BE CONTINUED...
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I like it, but I wanted to mention that EJ likes kidneys, not liver.

Other than that, really good!
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