Mary-Sue - The Ultimate Guide

Mary-Sue - The Ultimate Guide

Based on every advice ever given, I believe I have conjured the ultimate guide to follow when creating an OC for any fandom, as Mary-Sue's exist everywhere. (There is still more to come, so don't panic if there is something left out. That just means it will be in a future chapter coming soon.)

published on March 03, 2017not completed

Relationships [In More Depth]

There's a lot to talk about regarding this, that I needed another chapter for it.
This next topic may go into touchy territory for the people who do this, but it will not affect those who do not do this.
And that is something I call the "Canon Change".
The Canon Change is the name I have given the situation where an OC is paired with a canon character, but the canon character's personality has completely changed and will only care about the OC they are paired with.
I added this specifically because I know for a FACT that there are some people here who do this.
I can understand that it's difficult to keep the charm of the canon characters, so we need to research the canon characters personality more, so only then we're able to.
Hell, I had trouble trying to be a few canon characters for my friends here.
If you are one of those friends reading this, please understand that I found it hard to get into their role, so I apologise for being super crap as the character.

Anyway, back to this.
I think a lot of you know people who have done this, but never even apologise if they mess it up. It's like, it's intentional.
And my God I hate when this happens.

And now that I have no other thing to say, I shall now leave this alone. If you can think of anything else for relationships, please let me know, and I'll add it to this chapter, then let you know it's updated.

And next chapter, I'll be going over VERY SENSITIVE TERRITORY OF PERSONALITIES AND TALENTS!!!
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I have very creative OC names what about roasted peanut butter choclate banana
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on January 31, 2018
Question:

What if for appearence, they have some of those attributes but make those realistic?

Such as, for females, they have huge breasts but when fighting it's a disadvantage, or, in general, they DISPISE them?
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Big breasts can be natural, or through plastic surgery, which is realistic. And it would hold them back, yes.
I suppose I do need to talk about appearances more.
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on November 23, 2017
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on November 23, 2017
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on April 02, 2017
Yep. Mary-Sue's aren't fun. At all. But hey, having blood relations to a canon character i.e a sibling to Sasuke, doesn't necessarily mean your character is a Mary-Sue or Gary Stu either. There are some pretty good non-Mary sue stories where this occurs. But that's beside the point. Anyways, other Mary-Sue traits include....Having multiple love interests, a perfect See More
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True, but I will be separately talking about them too. I'm not resting until this guide is complete.
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Fair enough~ :) (Long time no chat, by the way.)
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on April 01, 2017
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on April 01, 2017
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on April 01, 2017
I love this story! Maybe consider adding more about looks?
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The position of authority chapter's up, R'ena! Knock yourself out!
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on March 31, 2017
I will be soon. First I'm gonna talk about position of authority
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Yes!!
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on March 30, 2017
Oh you bet I will!
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on March 30, 2017
Ooh, that's good. And maybe talk about the immortality bullshit?
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on March 30, 2017
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on March 30, 2017
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on March 30, 2017
If you're gonna hate my new chapter, COME AT ME! I'm ready!
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lol ok so since I know your little message at the top was about me

I'm not on anything. its all a matter of opinion that you can't understand, that's why it was on the "unpopular OPINIONS" page

I just think having an of related to a canon character is cringy but here you are, freaking out again because maria wanted to get pissy about it
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I'm pretty sure you weren't the first to say it, hence why I said it wasn't to you.
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on March 12, 2017
you were even involved when I said it, tf
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on March 12, 2017
lol lie again
it says "to whoever said that blood relation makes your character a Mary sue..." and that was me

why would you put it there if it wasn't for anyone
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on March 12, 2017
What? It wasn't to anyone, chill.
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on March 12, 2017
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on March 07, 2017