The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

I wrote this story a while ago but really want to share it. I will update it regularly so please mark it as a favourite story so you won't miss out. Writing this really helped me get out my emotions into the story. PLEASE READ!

published on May 24, 2014not completed

Gabe's Rampage! (Still Laura's POV)

“Laura, babe we need to talk” said Gabe, looking Ryan up and down.
“What do you want? We have already talked. It’s over ok. It was bad enough that you threatened to kill me!” I said, trying to keep the tears pouring down my face.
“Who’s this?” Gabe asked.
“I’m Ryan and I would appreciate it if you backed off from my girlfriend.”
“Your girlfriend?” smirked Gabe. “We had a baby together” he said. Oh no! This was not going at all to plan.
“What do you mean? Wait. Laura are you pregnant?” asked Ryan.
“Babe I was trying to tell you.”
“Hang on. You let him go out with you and you didn’t think that it would be polite to just let him know about this whole pregnancy thing?” said Gabe, smiling.
“You shut up will you. For you information I was just about to tell him. You’re the reason it happened in the first place so you can’t talk” I said.
“Don’t talk to me like that. I have given you a child that you deserve. You are the reason you have a baby. I could have been anyone, it still would have happened.” He was really angry now. He was shouting. I thought he was going to turn away and leave, he was about to. But first the pain, the impact of his hit, struck my lower stomach.
I was winded, but alive. That was more than could be said for the little one inside of me. Though it had not been examined, I could feel it. My child was dead. I laid down on the floor of the mall, sobbing. I could see Ryan rushing at Gabe in the corner of my eye.
“Don’t you ever talk to Laura again, you understand?” shouted Ryan.
“I wouldn’t want to ever again. Good luck with her. She’s such a little B*tch.” That was all Ryan needed. His fist shot up through the air like a dolphin surfacing with a jump. Gabe screamed out in pain as his cheek was hit. That’s when I saw it. Something that of all things made me happy. Gabe running away. Fast.
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Great writing babe
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thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
Please keep woting
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I mean writing
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there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 14, 2014
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
more more more more :D please
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on July 07, 2014
I love your new chapters babe :)
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on June 25, 2014
I'm so glad people like my story :) I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014