The Sound of Revenge

The Sound of Revenge

I wrote this story a while ago but really want to share it. I will update it regularly so please mark it as a favourite story so you won't miss out. Writing this really helped me get out my emotions into the story. PLEASE READ!

published on May 24, 2014not completed

Doing the same

The loud music sliced at my ears. People were everywhere. They all looked a lot older than Laura, Leo and me but nobody was paying any attention. Laura and Leo went straight for the drinks counter and I followed them. They both ordered alcohol and Laura gave me a glass too. I looked at the poisonous liquid, daring myself to take a sip.
What the hell! I thought, taking a big gulp of the substance. I walked over to Laura who was dancing with Leo VERY enthusiastically.
“Laura!” I shouted over the music.
“What?!”
“Is this how you got pregnant? No wonder! Why are you even doing this? You’re already pregnant” I went off at her.
Suddenly she started crying. I might have been a little harsh. I started to feel really bad. I knew I had a temper and I wasn’t proud of it.
“Hey, sorry I didn’t mean that. I’m sure it was an accident” I said.
“I just thought if I came out here it would get better. I would forget about being pregnant. I would forget about Gabe” Laura looked to the ground.
“I thought you and Gabe were getting along really well, him being the father and all” I said.
“That was until he threatened to kill the baby if I didn’t and kill me too” She shouted and walked over to one of the couches in the room. She sat there sobbing.
“Wait he did what?” I said. I felt suddenly that Laura and I may have had more in common than I thought we did to begin with. Maybe we could be friends. I finally understood her. It was the same for me. I only came with her to this nightclub to get away from something. Jarrod. She had done the same.
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Great writing babe
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thanks logan x
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on August 17, 2014
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on August 17, 2014
Please keep woting
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I mean writing
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there you go. Hope you like the new chapters!
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on August 14, 2014
love the new ones, keep writing please
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on July 07, 2014
more more more more :D please
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on July 07, 2014
I love your new chapters babe :)
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on June 25, 2014
I'm so glad people like my story :) I'll add a new chapter!
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on June 16, 2014
The new chapters are so good!
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on June 03, 2014
This is such a great story Maddy! I hope it helps u to write this kind of stuff out.
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on May 31, 2014
Write more soon!
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on May 26, 2014
OMG PLEASE write more! This is really good!
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on May 25, 2014