amity -my own divergent book

amity -my own divergent book

tapanga is a peaceful girl who loves to take risks and if anything candor is not her place.

published on May 11, 2015not completed

chapter seven

chapter seven My blood dripped  into the amity bowl.  The dauntless booed and the amity cheered everyone else clapped.  I walked to the amity section and sat by a small brown haired girl and the other seat by me was empty.  a couple of names where called then may was called.  she walked up from a couple seat behind me and walked up to and smiled at Marcus, looked at me then at mako and cut her hand without hesitation and let her blood drop onto the dauntless coals. the dauntless cheered and amity didn't do anything, obviously trying to keep peace.  Mako was called right after may sat down, mako walked up and looked at the amity section then at me and smiled as he let his blood drop onto the amity soil.  he sat by me and i tried to keep my mind on the ceremony but i couldn't help feel scared even though i was going to a faction of peace. i looked at may who seemed to fit in at the dauntless group despite her red and yellow clothing it looked like she already made a friend, i turned to mako who seemed to fit in i wondered if i would fit in here i wondered if may would survive the dauntless faction she came from a peace faction to a suicide faction.  but i bet they would let her back in amity if she wanted but then again she does fit in.  the ceremony finished quicker then i thought i began to freak out about what would happen what would it be like in amity.  I guess mako saw how scared i was because as soon as we began walking he griped my hand which was shaking, he was scared too.  i looked at his and he looked at me then he smiled and stopped shaking and i seemed less scared.  we boarded the train and i watched as the dauntless crew jumped onto the train,i watched as may took her first jump as soon as she hit the train floor she began to laugh in excitement. the train reached amity quickly and me and mako walked out together.  all initiates gathered around a woman probably the age 56 but she seemed healthy.
"welcome" she said "i'm ally this is my last year teaching initiates today is a free day for getting into uniform and stuff" she smiled "at 12:00 i will give you a tour you have an hour see you then" ally walked to a big orchard and i looked around for a store
"so you guys new?" a small skinny girl asked
"ya" i said
"i'm mimzy i can show you to the shop"
"that would be great" me and mako followed her to a small shop. i got a red lace tang top dress,yellow high heels,yellow flats, and red flats,a red lace shirt,a yellow button shirt and red jean sorts a yellow dress, and finally a locket where i put a picture of may,mako,and me.
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