Just Poems And Stuff

self explanatory~ this is just a place I type down random thoughts and the like for all the see~ feel free to comment as it shows at least some people are interested~

published on May 18, 2014not completed

Confusion and Repetition

a familiar cliff, a familiar scene, different faces, a single hand, a fall through memories, reaching out, chaos and uncertainty, the eyes come open, a familiar cliff, a familiar scene, a hand that reached out, was it to push, or was it to help, another fall, a goal still within view, the sun is no longer setting, a different scene plays out, but the eyes come open, a familiar cliff.... a familiar scene, history repeating itself but what does it all mean, different stars in a sky not so familiar, memories on loop, tears falling faster, rain begins to pour but the drops feel similar
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You're really good at writing poetry. and expressing emotion through poetry. :( (I wish I could help you.....)
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on August 01, 2014
I see you. I see the little girl who needs help and you know my hand is always outstretched for you.
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on June 13, 2014
to*
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on May 25, 2014
don't you dare kill yourself, there is no reason for it! when there is nothing but darkness there is always light co brighten the world around you!
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on May 25, 2014
:(( I would cry if you died... Please don't think this about yourself.
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on May 18, 2014