Forget Me Not (Sapphire's end)

Forget Me Not (Sapphire's end)

A small girl who grew up with the wrong crowd, had been broken by abuse and misery was soon healed by the love of another. Ups and downs have occured in her life but each time she has been able cope and recover due to love. In her most bloody thirsty and treacherous adventure yet, Sapphire must survive till the end of her quest to set free another dimension and go home safely. Will love save her once again? Or will this be the end, of Sapphire the hedgehog. (Thank you to: everyone, I've had the time of my life here and this is my goodbye :,) I won't forget you)

published on August 12, 2016completed

Prologue

Prologue Slarus: the dimension of trapped souls who only knew one thing, to kill. The legend goes that the god of Mobius, Danga, and the god of Slarus, Mara made an agreement to share both worlds to make peace once and for all. Danga, being the gullible god she is didn’t suspect Mara to deceive her immediately. Mara killed off most of the living in Mobius leaving Danga grieving and weak. She begged and begged Mara to stop so she could have her world back. Mara took pity on the defenceless god and instead made a deal.
“Mobians from your world will be transported here to get back to your dimension. Kind and gold hearted souls. My people won’t take pity on these beings however as I curse them to kill. For every time a Mobian dies something will be written upon them in poison. This will carry on until the mobian is no longer able to function due to the amount of poison and die for the final time. However, this may drive the being crazy making them become one of my own creations, a part of my land waiting for the next mobian to come so they too will play my game. The end of the journey will be a portal to send them back to your dimension, I want to see how powerful your creations can be!"

Grieving and weak Danga agrees and sends a sacrifice to the world of Slarus. This has happened since the start of time, yet no one has ever exited alive though the portal. This could be because of the poison, the metal break downs or due to the fact the God Mara has made the portal almost impossible for Mobians to exit alive.
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Last chapter I found "apphire". I am wrong in saying that you meant "Sapphire"? X3 I am not a writer but just sayin
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XD Yep, oops!
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on August 14, 2016
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on August 14, 2016
Welp...I'm going to go to my emo corner to grow mushrooms. This pulled at the heartstrings for sure.
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^.^U sowyyyy
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on August 13, 2016
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on August 13, 2016
*trying not to cry in front of my mother*
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What did you think?? ^.^U
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Yay! And yeahhhhh ^.^U hehe
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on August 12, 2016
It was brill!!!
But real sad too....
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on August 12, 2016
*sends a virtual hug* :3 sowy
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on August 12, 2016
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on August 12, 2016
Your leaving?!
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;3
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XD lol thanks!
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on August 12, 2016
more than ok, it kinda scared me. I thought the parrot was going to kill them.although it's good.
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on August 12, 2016
What did you think of the story? :3 is it okay??
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on August 12, 2016
Nope, just killing off Sapphire :P I'll still RP as her I just wanted this to be here for when I do leave, not anytime soon though ^.^
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That's sweet X3 heheh
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on August 12, 2016
phew! thank goodness!
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Hope everyon enjoys! Scared to see feedback ^.^U hehe..
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18 chapters!wow! You did a lot of hard work !
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Ur welcome:D
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on August 12, 2016
Thanks! :D
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on August 12, 2016
Ofcourse! You will get sucess!;)
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on August 12, 2016
Yep! :3 I just hope it pays off ^.^U
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