The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

The Future of Mobius [Jackie's Story]

One of the few to remain a Mobian, discover Jackie's side of the story before the event began, how she founded the Dauntless Mobians, and her life being the leader in a world where most people are now robots.

published on February 19, 2015not completed

Chapter 9: The First Operation

**Jackie's POV*

The first plan has been made. Over the past few days, a few people have contributed to making special weapons for this plan. But I also have my doubts about this plan. For it all to go well would take a plan formed with intelligence, and preparation. It's thankful that we do have a few people with minds that possess intelligent quality. With any luck, the plan should work.
As we all suit up for the operation, I hear a knock at my door just as I'm loading my gun. "Jackie?"
It's a male's voice. I turn and look.
"Kyle."
"Hey. Heard you're leading this operation."
I giggle. "Obviously. I am the Queen, after all."
"Yeah, but... why are you really leading this?"
I'm not only leading this operation because I lead the Dauntless. I'm leading because if all goes to plan, we could rescue Sonic and Tails today.
"It..." I hesitate. Do I really want to tell him?
But if I don't tell him, how can I get it off my chest?
"It's because of my husband and my friend in there..."
"That's why you wanted the plan as soon as possible?"
I nod. "So they could be rescued at the earliest opportunity."
"That's actually a good idea."
"It is?"
"At least it isn't out of jealousy."
He's wrong. At first, it was. And now guilt punches me in the stomach. People could die today, and it will be because of my selfishness.
I have to do whatever it takes to prevent as many deaths as possible.

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**Jorja's POV**

All the robots have been summoned back to the base. We are now armed, guarding every sector. Even those who were sent on assignments earlier have been called back. Myself included. We've not been told why, though. That's what I hate about these summonings. We're never told why.
I stand with Sapphire and Leat at the first entrance to the base, and it's then that we hear a noise.
The blaring sound of a train.
Occupied with Mobians.
Regular Mobians who haven't become robots.
Dressed in dark clothing.
I aim my gun, as they begin to jump out, in small groups.
After they all have jumped, they make way for a certain Mobian.
This one has pink fur, dark purple hair, and royal blue eyes.
Jackie?
What is she, of all people, doing among people like those?
I am the first to speak up. "LEavE Now IF yoU HavE No dESirE To jOIn uS."
"Hah, why would we want to join you?" Jackie replies.
"I ExpECteD NotHIng LEss FRom YOu, jACkiE," I say. "WE arE GivINg yOU onE LasT ChaNCe tO SubMIt yOUrsELf tO Us."
"I told you," she says. "I will never, ever, submit myself, or my people, to the likes of Eggman."
The people behind her raise their fists, punching the air, hooting and cheering.
I stare at Jackie. I should have seen this coming.
But very well. If she wants it done this way, I can play her game.
I step forward to face her. "MInd TEllINg mE Who YOur FRieNDs aRE?"
"These, are my people. We are the Dauntless, and we will be the ones to end this reign of terror."
Okay, Jackie, you want to play this game?
Let it begin.
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on October 25, 2015
Pft, such a Kyle thing to say XD Anyway waiting for this shit to get real now #Can'tWait.
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on October 24, 2015
XD im rooting for Joria because I'm on her said but Javkie...but Joria..but Jackie...Ah! GO JACKIEEEEE X3
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on October 24, 2015
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I was like magic!! (magic is good :))
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on October 27, 2015
Just read it.
It was awesome!!!
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on October 25, 2015
I READ IT
HOLY NUTS
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on October 24, 2015
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on October 24, 2015
HHOOOOOOLLLLLLLUYYYYYYYYYYY
SHIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTT
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on October 23, 2015
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YAY!!!!
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on October 24, 2015
YUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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on October 23, 2015
YESSSSSS!
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Tell ya, if you did some badass fights in here too, with like the Robots vs Some of us, that'd be cool shit. @sapphirethehedgehog Best look out though XD
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on October 23, 2015
Yeah!!! :3
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on October 23, 2015
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on October 23, 2015
Amazing!!! Please write more.
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on October 23, 2015
awesome story!!!
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on July 19, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 25, 2015
OMG
OMG HOLY SHIT
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on June 23, 2015
Awesome!
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on June 22, 2015
Sapphire: I'm a robot?! D: noooooooo!
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on June 21, 2015
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*fangirl screams* YES YES YES!!!!!!
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on June 23, 2015
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on June 21, 2015
WRITE MOREEEE JACKIE MORE
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on June 21, 2015
This story is great!
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Thank you!
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on June 03, 2015
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on June 03, 2015
AWESOMELY EPICALLY KEWL
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Thank you!
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on April 01, 2015
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on March 07, 2015
Awesome nice idea of the new anti thing could be tense XD <3
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on March 06, 2015
Awesome!
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Welcome to Dauntless, Swift!
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Yeah, I like it
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on March 06, 2015
Btw you seen my new pic?
Ik it's rubbish, but look at it for me? I could use feedback.
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on March 06, 2015
Yeah! XD
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
IT WAS CELINA! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT!!!
And thanks for using my idea! :D
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Np! Glad you liked it!
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
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on March 06, 2015
its divergent style XD
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XD I LOVE DIVERGENT
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on March 05, 2015
XD Yeah, ik it's got a little Divergent in there,
but remember that I made the Sonic-Divergent cross-over, so... yeah.
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on March 07, 2015
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on March 05, 2015
IS THE ROBOT CELINA OMG OMG I WANNA KNOWWWW
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on March 02, 2015
Awesome!
Lilanna: *turns head this way*
*presses button that closes FNAF-style door, separating Lilanna and us*
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on February 27, 2015
Dun dun dun Sonic ye douche don't hurt a girl like that u mean man thing XD
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Weren't his fault. He was a robot XD
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Yeah well still
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
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Demn..this is a great story! Too bad it's too late for oc's..alwrll! Still I love it!
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Well ignore what I just said I will see ^.^ thanks Jackie
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on February 25, 2015
Who the hell said it was too late?
All you need is to make an OC on LilyIcicle's page for the main story, I'll look at it, and see where I can fit you in.
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on February 25, 2015
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on February 25, 2015
Pfttttt bring it! :D
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on February 23, 2015
pft no
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on February 22, 2015
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on February 22, 2015
PLOT TWIST!!!!
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IK!
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Awesome! If ya need any help, just ask. I'm here to help :)
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on February 21, 2015
Trying to work on it now
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on February 21, 2015
When ya gonna write the next chap? x3
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on February 21, 2015
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on February 21, 2015
ITZ SWIFT HEHH
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on February 20, 2015
Awesome!
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Thanks!
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Well swift time to die Kyle's ganna come bite chu:D
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SWIFT IS A MOBIAN, YOU IDIOT!
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Wait are dumb they speak the same language
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on February 20, 2015
It should be Danish!
Wait lemme check
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on February 20, 2015
Yeah I put it in google translate and it said it was no in Sweden -_-
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
What!? I googled that -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Actually, it's Danish.
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on February 20, 2015
Don't chu go Sweden on meh -_-
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on February 20, 2015
Still ganna do it XD
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on February 20, 2015
-_- This ain't a zombie apocalypse
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on February 20, 2015
I knew that <.< >.> still ganna bite them :D
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