Shifting hearts (fanfic story)

Shifting hearts (fanfic story)

A story from wáttpad about my character and camilo madrigal ^^ hope you enjoy!

published on June 13, 2022not completed

The proposal

5 years later carmen back looking beaten up. Isabela was the first to notice her and ran towards her "carmen!!! Are you ok? You look horrible!" Carmen looked at isabela and hugged her with tears in her eyes. "I miss camilo...." She said and isabela slightly smiled before urging her towards casita.

Dolores walked out of her room and gasped when she saw isabela walk in with carmen and she alerted the whole family. Camilo rushed out and quickly hugged carmen tightly to his chest "carmen!!! I'm so sorry for what i did to you 5 years ago i don't know what came over me..." Carmen hugged back "i forgive you camilo". Suddenly the whole family came out and hugged carmen tightly happy that she was back.

Carmen giggled "i missed you guys" she said and looked at her best friend. "Especially you bruno" bruno smiled and hugged her tightly "we missed you too carmen....i...missed you you are my favorite rat after all" carmen giggled "that i am!" She looked at antonio who smiled brightly. "My my how you've grown antonio! You're 10 years old now?" Antonio nodded happily. Carmen smiled and ruffled antonios hair up before looking at camilo with a small smile.

Camilo grabbed Carmen's hand smiling as he got down on one knee, pulled out a beautiful purple heart shaped ring with a silver band and said "carmen... You've been a huge part of my life... You helped me to finally figure out who i was, i could always be myself around you and i wanna be with you forever, so... Will you marry me?" Carmen was shocked as she out her hands on her mouth and began crying with joy and nodded her head "yes!" She finally said as camilo smiled and put the ring on her finger then hugged her.

The family cheered with joy and began to celebrate the proposal of carmen and camilo. Everything was going perfectly up until carmen passed out and the miracle candle was missing.
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