Shifting hearts (fanfic story)

Shifting hearts (fanfic story)

A story from wáttpad about my character and camilo madrigal ^^ hope you enjoy!

published on June 13, 2022not completed

Someone like you

A few weeks passed and it was raining cause pepa was upset for whatever reason she was upset about and carmen went to go see what was wrong when she saw camilo dancing with another girl in the rain and she felt broken but watched anyways hoping that it was just friendly like. What she saw next shattered her heart, she saw camilo kiss the girl when he dipped her down.

Carmen stormed over with tears in her eyes  "HOW COULD YOU CAMILO!?!?! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME!!!!" she yelled and suddenly the rain stopped, the madrigal family rushing over and saw camilo with the other girl holing her by the waist while carmen was crying. "I-i do mi amor..." "Really? Then why did you kiss her?" Carmen growled as she pointed to the woman in his arms and he quickly dropped her ashamed of what he had done and noticed his father giving him a look of disapproval and disappoinment.

"Nevermind.... I'll find someone like you..." Carmen looked at camilos family with a small sad smile on her face. "Thanks for being there for me..." She went to walk away but Antonio grabbed her hand trying so hard not to cry "please don't go.... I need you..." Carmen felt bad for doing this to Antonio but she wanted to be alone "I'm sorry Antonio.... Your brother cheated on me and i need time alone i promise I'll come back" she hugged the little boy as he cried and hugged back "ok... Don't break the promise...". Carmen smiled and turned to her best friend.

Bruno hugged her and rubbed her back "I'll be here when you get back carmen just...m promise me you'll be safe" carmen smiled and nodded before she ran off leaving the family to wave after her. Camilo rubbed his arm as Felix and Pepa soon glared at him once Carmen was put of sight "you're grounded camilo! You don't break a woman's heart!!!" Felix scolded as he firmly grabbed his sons hand and dragged him inside. Pepa looked at the girl with a look of disapproval and disgust before following her husband.

Antonio sniffed as he kept looking in the direction of where carmen went and hugged bruno "she's not coming back is she?..." Bruno looked at antonio "of course she is antonio she would never abandon us..." Bruno said trying to cheer up Antonio. Antonio only nodded slowly and went back to the casita. Both bruno and mirabel felt bad and already missed their best friend who was now heartbroken.

Camilo was in his room ashamed of what he had done to carmen. He loved her and wanted to marry her, he didn't know what had gotten into him when he kissed the girl. 'im such an idiot' he kept thinking over and over and eventually he began to cry. Dolores over heard her little brother and hugged him trying to comfort him "hey its ok little brother..." "No its not ok i cheated on carmen and i hurt her... She accepted me for who I was, never asking me to be anyone else...with her i finally figured out who i was".

Dolores felt bad for her brother and hugged tighter "I'm sorry camilo i wish i could help but carmen is gone, there's nothing we can do" "i know....i want her back".
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