Changing The World

Changing The World

With a war separating Earth, two sides (Adya,light side, and Duante, dark side) are locked in a deadly war. Two unlikely teams must work together to prevent a dark evil that is beginning to awake, or will they destroy each other in the process?

published on July 02, 2014not completed

The Difficult Challenge

The Difficult Challenge
Staring at what was in front of them, Lilith thought the one before was the hardest obstacle, but she turned out to be wrong. Hanging on the walls of the cave hung bodies of dead Duante and Adya people. Biting her lip, Lilith continued walking through the difficult path.

"How can you just walk through here so calm?" (Hannah glaring at the bodies)
"It is just a trick." (Lilith walking)
"Are you sure, Lilith? They look real." (Alana walking up to a Duante solider)
"There is something fishy about this." (Max analyzing the bodies)
"That is why we need to keep going." (Lilith still walking)
"I agree with Lilith." (Crystal walking)
"Can we not bury them real quick?" (Crystal Xie)
"That would be just planning our deaths." (Crystal)
"This is so heartbreaking." (Hannah)
"The pain these people must have embraced. That is horrible." (Lacee)
"But..who would do this?" (Evie)
"A dark monster." (Autumn)
"A dark monster?? Our master is anything but that." (???)

Looking in front of them, the girls discovered two dark girls. One appeared to have purple skin and scales every where. On the other hand, the other had large black wings and beautiful red eyes.

Max glared at the girls for a minute. Master? She recalled them saying. Are they his slaves? Examining the bodies and the girls more closely, she saw bite marks where someone began eating off them. Max finally pieced it together.

"Y'all killed these people. Now you are eating the bodies." (Max making a dagger appear in her hand)
"Look sister. One of the intruders got it right." (Girl with purple skin licking her lips)
"Why don't we introduce our selves since we will be the last two people you will ever see? My name is Cora." (Girl with large wings)
"My name is Sam." (Girl with purple skin)
"I don't really care who you are, but I am ready to kill both of y'all." (Crystal)
"I see you didn't want to gaze at the bodies. Are you that heartless?" (Cora smiling at Lilith)
"I actually have a friend in trouble and don't have time for this."  (Lilith drawing her sword)
"Just get out of our way neither one of you will be hurt." (Autumn drawing her bow)
"I'm afraid we are ordered to kill y'all." (Sam)
"You are gonna need a lot of power to kill us." (Lacee drawing her sword)
"Ha. I don't die so easily." (Hannah drawing her dagger looking at Kiara)
"I'm sick of all this already." (Evie drawing her bow while Merlin and Flash growled)
"This shall be a fun fight." (Sam)
"Get ready to die." (Alana)
"Your gonna do great guys." (Crystal Xie flying up in the air)

Shooting darkness out of her hands, Crystal sent her dark ray at Cora. Jumping up in the air, the dark ray only grazed Cora a little bit. Looking down at the white haired dark girl, a evil smiled curved on her face.

"Are you fighting for the right side?" (Cora flying in the air)
"I am a proud Duante solider. Now be still. It will only hurt a lot." (Crystal shooting another ray)
"Sister, I don't think she understands. Too stupid to join us." (Sam running at Crystal with her talons out)
"Look out, Crystal!!" (Lacee drawing her sword)

Quickly, Lacee clashed Sam's long talons with her sword saving Crystal.

"Thanks.." (Crystal still shooting Cora)
"No problem." (Lacee swinging her sword)

Coming up from behind, Lilith swung her sword from behind Sam; however, Sam saw her and held her off with her other arm.

"NOW, EVIE!" (Lilith)
"Alrighty!" (Evie drawing her bow)

With a powerful pull, the arrow soared strong and fast through the air piercing Sam's heart. Black blood oozed out of the hole, but only laughter came from Sam.

"Do you really think that will kill me? A simple arrow? You must be kidding me." (Sam) "Now let me show you just some of my power."

After saying that, Sam's arms turned into sharp purple blades. Each arm slung at Lilith or Lacee. Hannah came in from behind and tried stabbing her with a dagger, but Sam heard her coming and dodged the attack.


Crystal continued to shoot rays of darkness at Cora. No attack slowed the speed demon down at all though. Flying behind her, Alana got a clean power shot of lightening on her back. Cora screamed in pain as she flew down to the ground. Then, with the two daggers in Max's hand, Max threw them directly into the chest of the falling creature. Black oozed squirted out of the demon. To continue the pain, Autumn drew her bow back and shot dark arrows at Cora's wings.

"Good job, girls!" (Crystal Xie flying over head)
"I wouldn't congratulate them yet." (Cora standing up)

As she stood up, the girls saw the black bloody ooze dripping off her body while her wings were tore.

"With those injures, you can't keep fighting." (Crystal getting ready for a final attack)
"I beg to differ, my friend. Let me show you some real power." (Cora smiling)
"They are screwed." (Sam hearing her sister)

A red ray of light bursted out of Cora's body. Max saw her body growing stronger and in different shapes. When the ray disappeared, Cora's small girl appearance vanished and a muscular beast with sharp teeth stood in front of them.

"Now let the real fun begin." (Autumn smiling)


With Alyssa

Pain still shot through her head as she laid on the cold ground floor. All her body wanted to do was sleep for the rest of her time here; however, she knew what would happen if she fell asleep. How could she let herself get into the situation?

Suddenly, Alyssa heard a scream coming from the room. A loud girl's scream she heard before. With whatever strength she could draw up, Alyssa raised her body up. Slowly opening her drowsy eyes, Alyssa saw a blue orb sitting near her. Inside the orb, from what she could tell Alyssa saw Evie being throw against the wall my a purple lizard girl.

Looking around the room, no one else not even those creatures in the corner were in the room. Limping to the orb, Alyssa saw her friends.

Crystal, Autumn, Alana, and Max attacked this large beast like creature while Lilith, Lacee, Hannah, and Evie attacked a purple lizard go. Those girls. The monsters. They seemed so powerful. Why were her friends still here? Alyssa then heard something that made her realize that question.


Back with the girls

Lilith's body got threw against the wall by Sam. The power she held was incredible, but Lilith did not plan to admire her strength. Touching her cocker, she thought of what she needed to do.

"Y'all are pathetic. Did you really think you had a chance? Stupid Adya and Duante. Our master will arise. Just go home." (Sam laughing at the fallen girls in front of her)
"I won't leave her behind. Ali is coming home with us. We will get her back." (Lilith standing up)
"Ha. Master seems to like her I doubt that will work." (Cora looking at the fallen girls in front of her)
"We don't leave any one behind. We are a team. No one gets left behind." (Max standing up)
"Pathetic." (Cora walking towards Crystal)

Crystal Xie saw how tired Crystal was. Crystal tried to get up but couldn't get the strength. Seeing a dagger on the ground, Crystal Xie flew down and grabbed it. Flying quickly to Cora, Crystal Xie stuck the dagger straight into Cora's eye.

Cora screamed in pain; however she was still able to grab Crystal Xie. With tons of force, Cora threw Crystal Xie against the wall. Crystal Xie's body banged against the wall. Red blood flew out of her mouth as her mind and body became unconscious. At the moment she lost consciousness, she realized just how helpful she was to her friends. She did something.

"Crystal Xie!!!" (Everyone screamed)
"You will pay for that!" (Crystal pulling her body up)
"Dang, brat. Now I can't see." (Cora holding her hand over her eye)
"I'm threw playing it easy." (Lilith throwing her cocker down and transforming into her white demon wolf form)

With her dark growls, Lilith circled around her opponent waiting patiently for the right moment. Sam smiled evilly as she rushed to Lilith swinging her arms from side to side. Scratching Lilith's side one time, Sam thought she won, but in her moment of victory, Lilith found a small but useful opening. Rushing by Sam's side, Lilith ripped her purple skinned throat out. Black oozing blood bursted out squirted in every which way. However, the rush of blood did not stop Lilith from continuing to rip bloody pieces from Sam.

"Lilith, Stop! She is dead!" (Evie raising up)

Glaring at the mess of guts and blood, Evie grew a sense of fear rising inside of her. Never could she imagine a wolf could be that power. What was Lilith? Watching Lilith get up, Evie glared at Merlin and Flash ordering them to get Crystal Xie to safety.

"Sister!! You will pay you mangy mutt!" (Cora)
"You ain't finish with us." (Max jumping in the air)

In mid air, Max's speed ability granted her the chance to have a clean shot for the lower neck. With her dagger fiercely gripped, Max dug her two daggers into the rough skin of the beast with one clean, deep cut.

Seeing her chance, Crystal used the dark, angry energy roaring inside of her out through her hands. A large blast of darkness shot straight through Cora's heart. The large beast fell down. In their weak state, the girls walked up to the fallen body of the beast.

With Alyssa

"Wow," thought Alyssa watching her friends' amazing abilities. Alyssa always knew her friends were strong, but those girls seemed more powerful than them. Teamwork? Could it be? Adya and Duante working together. A smile curved on Alyssa's face until a sentence emerged from the fallen beast.

"You will be too late. Master will have her by his side soon." (beast final words)

At the first moment, Alyssa seemed confused until she started walking out the door. Pain emerged all over her body. The shooting agonizing pain made her body fall to the floor. How could this be happening so quickly? What had happened to make this happen? Alyssa's vision began to grow more blurry, and darkness felt like it was swallowing her up. Then, her painful mind finally realized what was happening. The voice helped out more than anything.

"Hello, Eleanor." (Nemesis)
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But thanks for te update!! Awesome! (Yet again)
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Haha! I'll finish the next chapter today
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on October 14, 2014
I finally updated this lol
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H*ll yeah! Now I'm on a go read..
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on October 10, 2014
When are you going to update?
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I am gonna update very soon. Haven't had much time to be on since school but I will try now
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Oh kk
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OMFG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO AWSOME!
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If i could rate this again and again i would, this deserves more then five stars, But in all honesty, the only thing is it needs to be edited as I have seen some mistakes still all in all I am LOVING this story,
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on July 19, 2014
This is getting interesting.. Even though it even was already
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Thank you! ^_^
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on July 17, 2014
Sweet
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on July 16, 2014
YES NEW CHAPTER!!
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on July 16, 2014
aaaaawwwwwwssssssoooommmeeeeeeee
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on July 11, 2014
Thanks for adding that, this Story is so amazing ^.^
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on July 09, 2014
I love it! Its amazing! And oooo OMG im so evil >:D
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MUAHAHAJA xD
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Loving it^.^
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on July 07, 2014
Amazing battle good imagery
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Thank you!
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on July 04, 2014
This looks awesome
keep writing and i will keep reading thanks for picking Lacee though.
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Your welcome! And thank you for liking it :)
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So awsome so intreasting my GOD u write amazing!
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Thank you! :D
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This is so AWESOME!
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Thank you! :D
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