The Day
"The day?" I asked, confused."Yes, you know what I'm talking about," Aunt Claire said, "figure it out!"
The day...the day...oh no!
"The Day", as my Aunt and I call it, is when we go to visit my mom in the asylum. Trust me, it's not the most comforting thing and I dread this day every month.
"Let's go then," Aunt Claire said quietly.
I sighed. I threw on my jean jacket and opened the door. I walked over to Aunt Claire's car and clambered into the backseat.
Aunt Claire came into the car and started to drive. There was an eerie silence during the ride. Finally, I saw the sign: Brookinham's Asylum for Crazy People.
The name just made my mother look worse.
"We're here," Aunt Claire muttered.
I braced myself for the worst. I did NOT enjoy visiting my crazy mother.
(I'm so sorry! Hit me for making you wait so long! I deserve it! I know this chapter's pretty short, and I'll try to post the next one A.S.A.P.)
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Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
Yup XD
o_o Cliff-hanger!
Who?
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
Why did Giselle scream?
I MUST KNOW.
You'll see...
Can't wait for more
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy
Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool
This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.
Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
I will try to post A.S.A.P.