My (Crazy) Mother Alice
"Mum?" I called out tentatively.A woman with waist-length blond hair turned to me.
"Giselle?" she cried happily, "Oh Giselle!"
"Good afternoon, Alice." Aunt Claire said with a tiny nod.
But my mom had eyes only for me.
We were out in the asylum garden, my mom's favourite place to be.
Just then, a butterfly landed on the table.
"Well, hello there!" Alice said to the butterfly, "How do you do?"
Aunt Claire rolled her eyes.
But she didn't know that I could hear the conversation perfectly.
"I'll let you have a-um-private chat with your mother." Aunt Claire said, walking out the door.
Then I was alone with my mom.
"You understand them, don't you?" my mother asked.
I was surprised.
"No, not-but-yes," I stuttered,
I looked down, ashamed. Well, now I know for sure that I'm insane!
"Let me see your scar," Alice demanded.
I pushed up the sleeve of my right arm.
"It's all his fault," my mom muttered.
His fault?
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"Come back here!" I yelled, chasing a beautiful butterfly.
I laughed as the butterfly teased me, doing flips and zipping up and down.
"Get away from my daughter!"
I turned around.
My mom was running towards us, screaming hysterically while brandishing a knife. She waved it threateningly in the air.
I was frightened. What was she going to do?
Alice ran towards the butterfly. I gasped, at last realizing what she was going to do.
"No!" I put my hand in front of the butterfly, my friend. The blade struck my arm. I dropped my right arm, looking at it. I was completely dumbfounded. Then the pain came.
"Daddy!" I wailed, clutching my arm.
I glanced at it. The blood was really started to come now. I was terrified.
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Mothenzerath...wait, isn't that the boy with three-year-old Giselle in your mini-chapters?
Yup XD
o_o Cliff-hanger!
Who?
Can't wait to see what the master's like hehe...
Why did Giselle scream?
I MUST KNOW.
You'll see...
Can't wait for more
It doesn't matter how many people read it, my own story doesn't get noticed yet I love writing more, and seeing my very few readers happy
Can I give you some advice? I feel that the bully is a little cliche, an interesting backstory would be cool
This is a lovely story, please keep writing!
I do have a backstory, I just don't know if I want to put it in here...maybe I'll make a separate story for Zoe. So everyone can understand why she's the way she is.
Yes, writing is wonderful! And it feels so nice when people read.
I forgot to comment on your wolf story, but it was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! @Eeveewarrior
I will try to post A.S.A.P.