Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

New and improved

Kyle's POV
----------------------------------------------------------
I was asleep but I could still heard what was going on, and feel the pain from whatever they did. "He's still unstable, even with the changes" I heard a robot say.
"It's fine, he hasn't got as "super" of a brain, he won't even know what's going on" I heard Jorja, the bitch! She had no idea.
"Well, he may still be a threat, due to his fire and super speed, not to mention the super transformation. And because he's unstable I have no idea if, when he's in a rage he won't transform" OK when and how? Wait, I don't care I'm ganna have some fun with that. I felt the straps come off my arms and legs. OK, in 3, 2...F*ck it...I stood right up...And I just ran, smashed Jorja and the robot out the way and was gone. Super speed is awesome! I just kept running and made it some sort of security room. "Hmmm" I waked up yo the screens and looked at each one. "Where are you?" I knew Jackie and Sonic where still in here. I saw them on the screen. "Bingo...Argh" I heard the alarms and red lights started flashing. I'd say I have minutes to get to them. Two robot came to the door. OK, think, what is that thing sonic does? Ahh! I spun into a ball and rushed right at them. I smashed them into pieces and went off to the cells.

I spin dashed into some robots guarding the door and ran up to the cell Sonic and Jackie where in. "Afternoon lovers"
"What do you want?" Jackie looked at me with fury. I rolled my eyes and put my hand on the lock like thing next to the cell. How hard can fire be right. I focused and I slowly melted the lock. I looked at them both. "The way outs this way, you can come with or stay here an-"
"You know? I don't WHY he made you!" I heard Jorja shout down the hallway. And she has MY staff!
"'Cause I'm awesome. Change of plan, I'm ganna beat the living hell out of you and then go" I said to Jackie and Sonic.
"Why should we trust you?" Jackie asked.
"Oh my god that's such a movie thing to say. And it's because I'm all you got right now. Now...GO!" I yelled turning to Jorja.
"So you're going to fight me now?" She mocked.
I click my neck "Nah just ganna take the staff and gooooo" I just ran at her and took it off her back. "See, bye!" I ran off again after Sonic and Jackie. I ran past them and went for the main door. "Hey! Lets go!" We all ran out as fast as we could and just legged it all the way we could.

We got to the city and I started panting, I wasn't used to this. "Dam...That it fun!" I put my staff on my back and Jackie slapped me in the face and just ran off followed by Sonic...OW, SHE HITS LIKE A PRO. To be fair I deserved that. Oh well. I put my hood up and walked away. I was most likely shunned for what I have done.
Join Qfeast to read the entire story!
Sign In. It is absolutely free!
5.0
Please Rate:
0.0 out of 5 from 1 user

Comments (37)

X3 Awesome!
reply
Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
reply
Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
reply
About Author
Report
on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
reply
About Author
Report
on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
reply
About Author
Report
on July 03, 2015
About Author
Report
on July 03, 2015
About Author
Report
on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
reply
Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
reply
About Author
Report
on June 04, 2015
About Author
Report
on June 04, 2015
About Author
Report
on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
reply
I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply
About Author
Report
on May 01, 2015
About Author
Report
on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
reply
I told you I'd say :P
reply
About Author
Report
on May 01, 2015
About Author
Report
on May 01, 2015
About Author
Report
on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
reply
Coz she is. XD B)
reply
XD yayyy!!!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
reply
Ikr!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
reply
I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
reply
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
reply
Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
reply
Sapphire: :c boo
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
reply
Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
reply
Kyle: -_- OK
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
reply
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015
About Author
Report
on April 27, 2015