Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

A touch of kindness

Kyle's POV
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I'd been walking like 30 minutes until I got just out of town. I swear all I got was a dirty looks from everyone I passed, there was the odd concerned one what with the cut running up my arm. I didn't really pay attention to anyone. That was until I walked past a certain house with a orchid purple fox in the front yard. I stopped as I caught her eyes. We looked at each other for a second. Then she stood up and said. "Ar-Are you okay?"
I paused for a second "Yeah, I-I think so" I looked at her as she slowly walked over.
She looked at the cut going up my arm. "What happened?"
I wasn't sure how to answer. "I walked...Into...A door" Nailed it.
She raised an eyebrow. "Come on in. I'll get you healed up" Did she believe that? She turned and walked into her house. I stood there for a second and looked around before following her inside. "Sit down over there, I'll be back in a sec" She said pointing at the floor just in front of the fire place. I went and sat down where she wanted me to. I sat there and waited, waited and waited. Until she came back in with a cloth and some water in a blow. She put the blow down and sat beside me. "Now this may hurt" She said as she put the cloth in the water.
"Pft, I have had worse" I told her. I flinched as she pressed it against my arms cut. my left ear twitched as she started to stroke the top of my head. "What? What are you doing?" I asked.
"Trying to calm you down, I guess" She started to finish up on my arm and took her hand off my head and moved the cloth off my arm.
"That it?" I wondered.
"You should be okay" She assured me. "I'm Suella by the way"
"Thank you Suella, I'm Kyle" I stood up slowly.
"Are you sure you're going to be okay?" She asked me.
"I've been worse, I need to go" I started to walk to the door.
She followed me. "Alright, just be careful, I guess"
"I'll try, thanks again" I opened the door and walked out. She closed the door behind me. I walked off and went looking. I was looking for a certain someone. I had to find Sapphire at some point. We need to talk.
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X3 Awesome!
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Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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I told you I'd say :P
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
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Coz she is. XD B)
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XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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on April 27, 2015
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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