Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

A promise broken

Kyle's POV
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We walked into the main lab and dropped them both on the floor. "Easy and first try" I could swear something was up.
"Excellent, now phase two" Eggman said.
"What's phase-" I was cut off by two robots grabbing me. "What the hell!?"
"Oh come on Kyle...You didn't think we'd take a chance did you?" Jorja said taking my own staff off my back.
"But you said you'd make me complete, not this abomination!" I yelled.
"If you can beat Sonic. Why would I even let you live?" He told me.
"What have I done!? I can help you! Just finish me and I'll be unstoppable!" I was never finished by Eggman. I still only had half a ear which was blood red not blue like my other one. I was never finished at all.
"Why do we need for a fox with half a different coloured ear" She pushed the line.
"No one...Insults...My ear!" My eyes went red and pulled off the robots arms breaking free in the process. Jorja went to stop me by tazering me with the staff. I slowed down but didn't stop. I slowly knelt down. I grabbed the staff and slowly rose again. I was being shocked but I still tried to fight it. "You think that will stop me!?" I pulled the staff out of her hands and threw it away. Then I got headbutted by one of the robots. I fell and then...Darkness.

I woke up slowly and looked around. I was in the lab I was made in. All sorts of stuff was around, and I don't joke. I looked up and saw a needle above me. "About time you woke up" I heard Jorja.
"F*ck you too!" Opps bad word. I tried to lash out at her my eyes flickering from red to blue.
"Hey! None of that!" She was mocking me. "Now then shall we skip the intro and just get this over with?"
"Why are you doing this?" I was trying to help. "He'll just do the same to you!"
"No see that's were you're wrong...See unlike you I am needed now. We can make loads of you...Only with out the stupid parts" She flicked my left ear.
"You know I have learned something?" I told her.
She walked over. "Oh?"
I spat in her face "That's you're a bitch!" she slapped me right in the face.
"Do it!" She yelled looking behind her. The needle came down slowly. It was followed by more. It seemed there was one for each body part. I tried to move back but it was hopeless. They came down and pierced my skin. "ARRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHH!" I blacked out again...
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X3 Awesome!
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Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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I told you I'd say :P
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
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Coz she is. XD B)
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XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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on April 27, 2015
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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