Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

You still doubt me?

Kyle's POV
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I was walking around town looking around, trying to spot Sonic, when a girl called. I looked around, I saw her and walked up to her. "Who are you?"
"Chill kyle, I'm Jorja, Jackie's anti" She seemed legit.
"Anti a? No idea what that is but it sounds cool. Anyway what do you need?" I was interested now.
"Well I thought you'd like this" She took a 4 foot metal staff off her back. "This is a improved version of yours, as you may already be able to tell. It can absorb electricity and then give it out if you flick the switch, almost like a tazer but better" She explained. I took it and looked at it. It had a battery thing on it which was fully charged. Perfect take down tool. I took my old staff off and threw it on the floor and put the new one on my back. "Thank you" I said to her before turning off.
"You know you can't beat both of 'em?" She called as I walked off. I turned and walked back.
"Oh how so?" I asked.
"One: They both have super speed. Two: You can only predict one persons movement at once. Three: I have to come" She told me.
"OK One: I assume by they you mean Jackie and Sonic. Two: How do you know that? Three: Why?" This was weird.
"One: Yes. Two: I'll give you one guess. Three: I oversee you now or have been. Gave Knuckles what for a?"
"Hmph...Fine, lead the way" I stepped to the side and put my arm out. She walked off slowly "But DON'T get in mine" I made it clear I was not to be messed with. She smiled at me and walked off. I rolled my eyes and followed her.

We kept walking. And soon enough we found them. They were walking together just talking. "OK we go in quick an-" I ran off as she tried to explain. I ran right at Sonic. He spotted me and ran at me. I slide as he sped up, I got him right in the leg with my foot and he went right over me. He landed on his back and Jackie came running at me for behind me. She was cut off by a swift elbow from Jorja. We were back to back with them in front of one another, Jackie in front of Jorja and Sonic in front of me. "Who are you?" Sonic asked me.
I slowly took my staff off my back slowly "The guy who's ganna bet ya'" I let my staff hit the ground.
"Dam it Jorja what now!?" Jackie yelled at her.
"I'll give you one guess" She smiled back. It was a stare down for a while. I flicked a switch on my staff and two little spikes came out of each side and sparked abit. I gave another run at Sonic. He waited and ran off to the side. I hardly saw him move! Next thing I knew I was on the ground. I sat up and saw Jorja trying to fight both of them. I got up grabbing my staff again as Jorja came flying at me and landed in front of me. I looked at Sonic, who was running at me again. I watched for the short time I had. I just managed to dodge off to the left. Jorja got up again and went at Jackie again...She didn't last long. Sonic came by and I just managed to punch him in the face, just, he fell over and laid there a minute. Jorja was pinned to the wall by Jackie. I walked over while Sonic was getting up. I spun my staff and slammed it into Jackie's back with the tazer. She got shocked and just sorta...Fell. How many volts does this thing have. No time for that. I annoyed lover boy behind me. I knew he was going to punch me in the back, so I turned and faced him. I put my staff out in front me and he ran right into it. And like Jackie sorta fell after taking it to the chest. "Was that it?" I asked and helped Jorja up.
"Shut up!" She snapped.
"Excuse me?" She doesn't not want to get on my bad side right now.
"Sorry look...Lets just get them back" I picked up Sonic as she said that. I walked off and she followed. We had to get back like asap.
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X3 Awesome!
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Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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I told you I'd say :P
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
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Coz she is. XD B)
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XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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