Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

Anger issues

FT: sapphirethehedgehog
Kyle's POV
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I didn't want to fight him in a way. it would be too easy and a waste of time. I'll give him once chance. "A man chooses but a slave obeys, now will you kindly make the choice to get the hell out my way?"
He paused and just stood there "No" he asked for it. He came at me. I broke into thought. I studied him in the few seconds I had. I ducked knowing he was going to try to punch me in the face. He missed and punched him the stomach. He backed off, he didn't give up though. He ran at me again. I stopped and as he came pushed his arm aside and headbutted him in the nose. You think he would have learned by now? Wrong. He went to punch me again. I grabbed his fist as he did, he tried with the other hand, I did the same to that one. He was stronger but I was faster, that was my advantage. I kicked him away, he landed on his back and laid there. He got up and I looked at him "You know? I could kill you now, I'd save lots of time" then Sapphire came to his defense and stood there in front of him.
"Whoa too far!" She was mad it seemed.
"Stay out of my way" I told her calmly. "He needs to be put down. Permanently"
"Not if I have anything to say about it" She ran at me, fast, too fast! I couldn't predicted her movement. She slammed her fist into my face running past me, she turned and did it again and again and again. I was out match. Or was I. I stood up and looked at her. She ran off to the side, but this time, I knew what she was going to do. I grabbed my staff and took it off my back. I waited till she was to the side of me, she was running at me. I stepped back and put my staff out and down to the floor. She came into it too fast and tripped over it. She recovered and ran at me again. I put my staff out to the side and she smashed right into it and stopped dead. She knelt down holding her stomach. "How did you even keep up?" She said slowly getting up again.
"Hehehehahahha, see remember what I said about the "Talent"? Well it works for movements too. I know what you're going to do before you even do it" I smiled and looked at her. "I just needed a few minutes to catch up to your spe-" I was cut off by a punch to the face. I backed off and looked at the source of the punch with a incredibly angry face. It was Knuckles "Predict that" he said. I wiped my nose, bleeding...He drew blood. How dare he? My eyes went red, blood red, and I stared at him. I can see he knew I was mad. I walked right up to him. He tried to punch me again. I grabbed his fist and slowly crushed it.
"Hey calm down!" I heard Tails yell at me.
I let go of Knuckles "Geez, he was right" I looked at my hands. I was still unstable.
"Thank you" He said. I didn't pay attention. I started to walk off. I was going to have to find Sonic fast. Those guys were going to tell him I was after him soon.
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X3 Awesome!
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Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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I told you I'd say :P
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
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Coz she is. XD B)
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XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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on April 27, 2015
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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