Kyle's story (Remastered)

So I got to thinking and saw that Kyle is 1. Too over powered. 2. His back story is fairly far fetched. So imma do it again with some changes.

published on April 27, 2015not completed

Blending in

FT: sapphirethehedgehog
Kyle's POV
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I was in the city...Nothing much just some people walking around looking at me...I blame the ear, half an ear never looks good. I kept walking when suddenly I bumped into someone "Do you mind?" I asked them.
"Sorry about that but there was no need to be rude" A light blue hedgehog was standing there. Sonic? No can't be, she's light blue and a girl.
"Hmph, sorry excuse my manners. I'm sorry wasn't watching where I was going. I'm Kyle" Another talent of mine, being very crafty with my foes.
"I'm Sapphire! Nice to meet you!" She said excitedly. No lake of energy I could bet.
"Hmm, would you happen to know Sonic?" I asked trying to keep charterer.
"Who don't?" She asked me.
"Haha would you know where he is? We have..."Matters" To talk about" Seems I was believable.
"I would think so. I can take you to him if you want?" This may be easier than I thought.
"Why not? Thank you"
"But one more thing" She paused in mid turn.
"Oh, what's that?" I was abit worried.
"Can you keep up?" I suddenly burst into thought. And then this happened.
"Well you can run at over 120 miles an hour, with ease, while I can only go like 5 at my best. So answer no" Don't ask what I just said because I don't know.
"How did you?" She looked at me as if I just did something amazing.
"Call it a special talent" I don't if you call that a talent but hey.
"It's cool!" She said as we walked off.

We were going to a hut like thing. "He's normally here with Tails" She told me.
"Ah Tails, young yet very smart" Don't ask I don't know.
"Yeah" She said knocking on the door. Tails came to it and pecked out.
"Oh hey Sapphire!" He opened the door.
"Hey Tails!" She replied.
"Who's your friend?"
"I'm Kyle, I'm just here to see Sonic if he's there" I told him.
"Oh he's not. He may be back soon" Tails told me. Missed him!
"It's OK I-" I heard a voice.
"Oh hi guys! Who's the new guy?" I know that voice. That' Knuckles. I turned and faced him. If he was what I had heard, he'd know that I'm not who I say I am. He may be a thick, but his combat awareness is just as good as mine.
"I'm Kyle. I'm here to see Sonic" I introduced myself again. He looked at me. Did he know?
"Why?" He asked.
"None of your business" I told him. I pushed past him. Moments later I could sense he was going to grab my shoulder. I waited till he did, I grabbed his arm and threw him over my shoulder. "Don't not touch me!" He got up and raise his fists. If it's a fight he wants it's a fight he'll get.
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X3 Awesome!
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Kyle: Found ya! Idk what i wanted to say was...
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Sapphire: *facepalm* XD
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on July 03, 2015
Kyle: Idk
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: hm?
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
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on July 03, 2015
Sapphire: *reads "super speed is awesome" HECK YEAH!!! XD
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Kyle: Tch, ikr? So cool.
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
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on June 04, 2015
You know what we need in this story?
WHEN KYLE MET SUELLA!
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I'm getting to that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
So that's how you got your ear like that! XD
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I told you I'd say :P
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
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on May 01, 2015
XD Omg i loved this, you made Sapph look so awesome!
Sapphire: B)
:P
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Coz she is. XD B)
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XD yayyy!!!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
XD damnnnnn, this is where it gets rough! XD
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Ikr!
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
O_O
Sapphire, Tails, and Knuckles?!?!
HOLY HELL, SHIT IS GONNA GO DOWN!!!
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I don't think Tails is ganna fight tbh he's more passive. XD
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on April 28, 2015
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on April 28, 2015
D: Noooooo! Not Sonic DX
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Kyle: Why does everyone like him so much?
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Sapphire: :c boo
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: I really don't care.
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on April 27, 2015
Sapphire: Hes a hero! The hero of mobias and the blue blur!
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on April 27, 2015
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: X-( YOU DARE KILL MY SONIC!!!!!!!
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Kyle: Stay out of my way woman. Or I'll do the same to you.
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Kyle: -_- OK
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: *smirks* What if I told you who my father was?
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ummm I have only just woke up from like a 2 year sleep and I have only every been woken up one other time. So fears not an issue. Also I am a bio mechanical robot I don't think I can be done over that easy. Nice try though.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: It's called simulation serum. Your worst nightmare. You fall unconscious, and your brain produces a hallucination of your worst fears. And you don't wake up until you can calm yourself down... which will be hard considering it's your WORST FEARS!
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: And that will do what?
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Come near me and I inject this in you.
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on April 27, 2015
(Wow XD)
Kyle: Um what? Why? You're weird.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Oh really? *takes out a needle*
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on April 27, 2015
Kyle: Ohhh I'm so scared of someone who is just as normal as me. Take me apart I'll just be built better. And the more we fight the better I become woman.
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on April 27, 2015
Jackie: Hm. Brave mortal, wanting to battle a DEMIGOD.
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