A Knight's Cry

Liam, a knight finds himself avenging his family with someone he never knew before. Liam must fight through the pains and fear of the mission. [Thanks for Reading! Please give Feedback!]

story.writer published on September 25, 2015not completed

To An Enemy Land.

        There it was, a giant castle. Straight ahead. But how would they get in?
        "Now, what's our plan?" said Liam.
        "Let's scout the area. Liam, take off your armor and act like a peasant," ordered Rose.
        "How dare you tell-" Liam stopped himself and obeyed.
        Liam headed over to the two and was undercover. He tried to find as much information as he could find in the kingdom. Liam then came back with answers.
        "So, what do we do?" asked Rose.
        Liam put his armor on.
        "Enter through the sewage hole in the castle now. It shouldn't be dirty because they just washed it clean. They're clean-freaks," said Liam.
        They both entered through the sewage hole and made it up to the bathroom. Thank goodness no one was in there.
        "Good, now lets go," said Liam, eagerly.
        They traveled up to the first tower and overlooked the castle.
        "I think we have a plan now!" said Rose.
        "I assassinate the king, while you protect me. Deal?" said Liam.
        "Sure, sure," said Rose.
        They went down and barged into the Royal Hall.

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story.writer The Jbone published on September 25, 2015

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vive_la_revolution

I LOVE that you actually have good grammar. That's surprisingly hard to find on here. However, I feel like there could be some improvements in your writing as far as emotion, thoughts, feelings, descriptions, and flow are concerned. You need to be as into your writing at the time you type as you want the reader to be when they read. Also, are you really going See More