A Knight's Cry

Liam, a knight finds himself avenging his family with someone he never knew before. Liam must fight through the pains and fear of the mission. [Thanks for Reading! Please give Feedback!]

story.writer published on September 25, 2015not completed

Kill the King,

        The knights reacted quickly and charged at Liam. Rose got Liam's back while Liam fought his way up to the king.
        "YOU KILLED MY MOTHER!" Liam would yell in anger.
        "Now, you can watch me kill YOU and YOUR KINGDOM!" yelled out Liam.
        By then, Liam had made it to the throne without any knights to stop him, while Rose was still defending his backside.
        "How? Slow or Quick? I prefer a slow one." said Liam.
        "Wha-What do-do you mean?" said the king, shaking with fear.
        "I guess quick then," said Liam.
        Liam then stabbed the king. Then, he took the body and ordered the meeting by the castle.
        "Peasants of this kingdom, behold, your king!" Liam would say and he'd show the body. Liam then threw it off of the castle.
        "My job here is finished." Liam said, walking away.
        "Liam-" Rose got cut-off.
        "Rose! We can go now!" yelled Liam.
        "I'm staying to help these people." said Rose.
        "Fine. See you back at the kingdom." huffed Liam.
        Liam then walked out of the kingdom, took their flag and ripped it in half.
        "Pity." said Liam.

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story.writer The Jbone published on September 25, 2015

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vive_la_revolution

I LOVE that you actually have good grammar. That's surprisingly hard to find on here. However, I feel like there could be some improvements in your writing as far as emotion, thoughts, feelings, descriptions, and flow are concerned. You need to be as into your writing at the time you type as you want the reader to be when they read. Also, are you really going See More