Donuts on the board walk

Donuts on the board walk

this story is about a girl that lose her family and turns to a orpan and tries to find something to eat.So she finds a donut on the board walk

published on February 27, 2015not completed

Red carpet trouble

Red carpet trouble The girls jumped up and down with glee and was hoping to get the doughnut and go straight back home.  The stars were posing and showing everything that got.Ruth pushed down one star and the fell like wind hit them hard.Belinda grabbed a rope that was long so it and be the size of an alligator. So the girls stepped into action. While Ruth was busy pushing down stars,Belinda threw the rope and ......she got the doughnut and called Ruth.''RUTH,RUTH,RUTH''.''What'' Ruth said. ''We need to get back home because i got the doughnut and all the stars are trying to get back on their feet''Belinda said.
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on February 06, 2016
this was the best story i ever heard
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on April 26, 2015
how to do u edit
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on February 28, 2015
Good but you need to edit it for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and so it makes a bit more sense.
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on February 28, 2015
Great story! I suggest editing it to correct misspellings and grammar issues, but the story itself is superb!
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on February 28, 2015
Thx :D
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on February 27, 2015