Donuts on the board walk

Donuts on the board walk

this story is about a girl that lose her family and turns to a orpan and tries to find something to eat.So she finds a donut on the board walk

published on February 27, 2015not completed

The doughnut

The doughnut Belinda and Ruth ran as fast as they could to fund the rolling doughnut.''The red carpet is to far and my legs been up and down all day''Ruth said. "Well it is your fault that you bumped into me''Belinda shouted. ''I didn't mean to Belinda i did not know that you were right there,i was paying for the donuts''Ruth yelled out. "We need to keep going ''Belinda said. The girls were very tired and needed a good night sleep before they got up and looked for the doughnut.The pulled out an old bed and slept.

The next morning Belinda was already up searching. Ruth ran until she found Belinda.''Hey why did you run away from me i was looking everywhere for you.''I was in the coffee shop getting us some breakfast''.Belinda said "We already have 67 donuts we haven't ate yet,we still have 34 water bottle we haven't drunk yet,why would you go and buy more''Ruth said very angry.''oh i forgot ,i didn't know that you already had plans''Belinda sad very very surprised. So the were eating and walking under and old shed behind the coffee shop.''I am to full and i can not eat nothing else''Ruth said.She threw away the doughnuts and they found the red carpet.
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on February 06, 2016
this was the best story i ever heard
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on April 26, 2015
how to do u edit
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on February 28, 2015
Good but you need to edit it for spelling, grammar, punctuation, and so it makes a bit more sense.
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on February 28, 2015
Great story! I suggest editing it to correct misspellings and grammar issues, but the story itself is superb!
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on February 28, 2015
Thx :D
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on February 27, 2015