The Visitors

A teenage girl suddenly developes the ability to see, and talk to ghosts. She learns she has several ghosts living in her house. This is part of an ongoing series to continue for a while.

published on July 07, 2015not completed

Encounters... new,and old

   The next day at school... "Jenn why are you always smiling"? I asked. "Because I'm always happy"? I love Jenn, but I can't stand her. "Diane's so weird I'm always happy, and you're always depressed". I don't get Jenn, yet we're best friends. I don't get that either. Me, and Dan are friends, but we're pretty similar. I was lost in thought, and smacked into the classroom door.
   Jenn asked "Diane what's wrong? You've been acting strange for a couple of days". I don't know why I'm acting strange. I could tell her about the ghosts, but I just don't feel I should. The rest of the school day nothing happened...
   I walked in to my room. Elizabeth was watching TV. She looked at me and said. "Hey, I just recently watched TV for the first time, why is reality TV so stupid? Back in my day we only kept up with our family, and our farm". I replied "Umm... I don't know". "How are you I haven't had a chance to properly introduce myself, I am Elizabeth  Fields". I was happy to finally, actually meet her. " I'm Diane Johnson". I saw a little girl in a fluffy dress walk out of the closet.
    Elisabeth said. "Oh did you meet Cailtlyn yet? She's my little sister. "The littlw girl strongly resembled Elisabeth. She gas a pink, and white dress, with a matching bonnet, and pretty. blond curls. Caitlyn hid behind her sister. Elizabeth laughed, and stated "She's a shy one". I wonder how many other ghosrs live, ir even visit here...
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Nice. I love the plot. I hate to be that one girl, but there are a few grammar errors. Other than that, 10/10.
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on September 10, 2015
Love your story
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on July 08, 2015
Looking good!
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