The Visitors

A teenage girl suddenly developes the ability to see, and talk to ghosts. She learns she has several ghosts living in her house. This is part of an ongoing series to continue for a while.

published on July 07, 2015not completed

Supernatural Depression

   Dan was just sitting in my bed with a sad face. I want to help him so bad. I can't stand to see people in pain, whether it be physical or mental pain."Are you all right"? I finally asked. Dan replied "Oh yeah, I'm fine". He suddenly made an obviously fake smile. He seems so different all of a sudden. I've only known him for 2 days so I can't really say that.
   "Do you mind if I watch TV in here"? Dan asked in a dull tone. "Yeah, I don't mind. He turned the TV on, and it was on Ghost Castle. In a hostile tone Dan said "I hate this show".   He layed back ob the bed, and sighed. It felt awkward to be alone with him, but I don't want to leave him alone while he's sad like this.
   I wonder, how can I help him? "Are you sure you're alright"? I ask. "Yeah, just fine". He says in an annoyed tone. I reply "I know you're lying". He looks at me for a minute, then replies. "Okay, so what? It's just that.... I just feel out of place. You're the only human that can see me, and the other ghosts, and I just don't get along"...
   I know what he's going through. Jenn doesn't really know me, even though we're friends. My dad never knew me, and my mom, and I don't talk much. I've never reallt been able to get close to someone because I'll only hurt them. Dan doesn't know the mistake he made, by giving me supernatural powers. I want to help him though...
   "Dan, even if i'm your only friend it doesn't matter, I know how you feel". He didn't say anything. I hope we can really be friends this is the first tine I've felt like I can help someone. Dan disappeared into the closet...
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Nice. I love the plot. I hate to be that one girl, but there are a few grammar errors. Other than that, 10/10.
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Love your story
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on July 08, 2015
Looking good!
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