Once There Was A War

Once There Was A War

The planes flew by. I was scared. Well not scared. More like terrified. They dropped bombs like madmen. All I coul here were explosions, and all I could think if were my parents, who had not yet returned home.

published on August 02, 2016not completed

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The town. It was destroyed too. I guess that's where the planes went in those five excruciating minutes. I walked around. This was strange. The town looked just like ours. I wasn't the only one to think so. Everyone in our group thought so. I walked toward the place my house would be in our town. The ruins looked just like mine. I reenacted what I did. I went down in the bomb shelter, came out. Looked around. And there it was. The little black face. Looking exactly the same. The I saw another girl behind me, gone out of he shelter, doing exactly what I did. She saw the face. She ran over to it. Stared at it. Just like I did. She whispered to it. Just like I did. She then left, looking for survivors, just like I did. She found 38 of them. But this time, 17 female, 21 male. What was going on. I went to go talk to them but when I started talking, they could not hear me. I touched them but they could not hear me. Then they started walking, south. Like we did. I realized I was not the only one in our group watching this. What was going on? We all decided that the same exact thing was happening to them that happened to us. We followed them. They walked a mile with them, then camped out. They didn't get much sleep, and the next day, they slept 4 hours before they got up and started walking again. They finally reached the town, and they were shocked. It was the same thing. Except once they reached the village, they saw us. Hey we're wondering who we were. So we decided to introduce ourselves.
"Hello" I said
"Who are you" their leader, I assumed, said.
"Well I don't know how to explain this, but we have been following you since you guys survived the bombing. I don't know what's going on but the thing that happened to you guys, well, it happened to us in the exact same way. The face, the bombing, 38 survivors, walking south, not enough rest, camping out, the four hours of sleep. We went through it too. And I'm guessing it's going to happen to these people too, because their village looks just like ours and yours when it was destroyed."
Way to go I thought. That was totally suttle! They all stood their shocked.
"What?!?"
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on August 28, 2016
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I just updated if you would like to read
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Yuuuuuuuuuuuss can't wait to read!!!
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@The_Bright_Side Okie dokie ??
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on August 25, 2016
Thanks so much... Honestly I'm making this up as I actually write it. I am going to publish more... I can't leave it like that! Trust me, I'm a fangirl, I know pain. I will be publishing lots more I just don't know when or how often. But I will be sure to let you know when I update it @Battling_Life
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on August 23, 2016
OH MY GODS THAT WAS SO GREAT IT REMINDS ME OF THIS SERIES OF BOOKS CALLED THE 39 CLUES! Just one question,: Are you gonna add more? You should get this published, it's really good!!
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on August 23, 2016
Yay! Okay!!
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No problem!!
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on August 23, 2016
Thanks
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on August 23, 2016
PLOT TWIST! I LIKE IT!!
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on August 23, 2016
(Omf this is really good!! Please, please write more!!!)
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I just updated if you want to read it
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on August 04, 2016
I will
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on August 04, 2016
Oml!!! This was SOOO good!! You had me hooked. Are you gonna add more? :)
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I just updated
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*gasp* yay!
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on August 04, 2016
Ya I am. Thank you soo much for the positive feedback! It made me smile. I will be sure to let you know when I update it :)
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No problem and ok! :D
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