Right In Front of Me (Finished)

Right In Front of Me (Finished)

You could say that Avalon is your average un-popular girl. She has dreams of being with Hayden, the most popular guy in her school. However, no one know that. Until she gets a new neighbor who's room is right outside her window. With many shared visits, and a strongly built friend ship, Her new neighbor, who is a guy in her grade named Greyson, helps her to get Hayden. But will Avalon realize what is in front of her? Or, rather, what is outside her window...

published on April 13, 2015completed

Chapter 3: The Falling Out

I slid on my simple outfit and sat down at my desk. I could feel him starring. Stop it, I thought. I finally turn in his direction. "What?!," I snapped. "Nothing...," Greyson chuckled. "Didn't I tell you yesterday that I don't want to talk to you?" I questioned him. "You'll come around." He winked. I rolled my eyes and turned my attention to my song sheet.

        "Da da. Da da. Da da da doo doo doo." I decided on that as a melody. Now it just needed lyrics. I hummed the melody to myself once again. "Da da. Da d-," I was interupted by Greyson's voice. "What are you working on?" He asked with a slight smirk. "Oh, you see it's this thing that's called privacy. You have probably never heard of it, have you?" I said in a sarcastic tone. He raised his eyebrows and nodded. "I see how it is." He replied.
        "Oh do you now?," I answered. "Yes, yes, as a matter of fact, I do." He said in a smug voice. I ignored him and returned to my melody. Perhaps it would be better if I didn't hum it out loud.

        There was a few minutes of silence, mostly because Greyson left his room.

***One hour later***Greyson's POV***


        I walked out of my brand new kitchen and up to the second floor of the house, making a bee line for my room. The first thing I heard was my neighbor in her room singing some song I had never heard before. "You walk in, and the room instantly lights up. From my point of veiw you couldn't be more beautiful. And all the other girls, they don't see you like I do. So don't let one of them be your girl when I'm the one for you." She sang. Wow, she has such a great voice.... Snap out of it, Grey! Uh-oh, she saw me starring...
        "What do you want? Why do you keep creeping on me? You've been doing that since the moment you got here! You are being so annoying. Just stop it, okay?!" She scolded me. "Uh, yeah. Got it... I'm sorry. You just looked so lonely... and... I've seen you at school and I thought... that maybe you'd like to talk to someone your own age." I told her. Her blue eyes looked down and then back up at me. "So I'm just your Charity case? Is that it? If you really wanted to talk to me you would've in the last nine years we've been in school together. So why now? You know what? Populars and losers don't mix. If your friends knew that we talked, you would lose your status. I bet you don't even know my name." She said a lot for a girl who never talks at school. "Amy...-"I started. "AMY?!"She yelled." I was right. Just cut it out. I don't have time for this."
        About 10 minutes later, I had decided to give up. It was no use. Suddenly I heard a loud buzz from outside my window. I looked in her window and noticed that right outside her window was a large hornets nest. "Uh, hey! What's-your-name!" I tried to warn her, but she couldn't hear me because she was listening to her iPod. "Hey! There is a hornets nest out side of your window! Hey!" I leaned out my window so she could hear me better, but before I knew it, I was falling out of my window.


***Avalon's POV***


        I heard a loud thud, and I tugged my headphones out of my ears and leaned out my window only to see Greyson laying on the ground between our houses passed out. What the?!
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on December 16, 2018
i love it! just maybe change it so you have a new paragraph when people talk:)
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on April 17, 2015
positive: Really good!!! I read it all!!! constructive comment: more detail to her surroundings. what does her room look like?, etc :)
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on April 16, 2015