Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016not completed

Danger

As Sapphire, Lili and Wave left the campsite, Sapphire wondered if she had just made a big mistake. In every scary movie she has ever watched, this is exactly what the characters did, spilt up, and then the killer picked them off one by one.
"Amy?" Wave rasped as they walked into the dense woods. "Blaze?"
And then the killer starts following them through the woods. They're easy to track because they make so much noise.
"Amy, we're sorry!" Lili whispered. "Oh, why did we sing so much? I can barely talk!"
"Hey, look at this," Tori said. She shone her flashlight on the bent back branches of a spindly bush.
"No. Way." Wave said excitedly. She looked down the map. "They must have made this path."
"When?" Lili asked. "They never left the campsite..."
"Ugh..." Wave shrugged. "How else would it be here? Plus, there's a mark on the map exactly here."
"There's a few more up ahead. I guess we should try to find them too?" The three moved forward, each girl stepping cautiously through the fog.
"Yesss!" Wave cried out. "The path leads this way! Amy! We know you're out here!"
"Amy!" Sapphire yelled. "Blaze!" They stopped to listen.
"We're too hoarse." Wave whispered. So was everyone back at camp. In the woods, no one can hear you scream.

They walked a little more, Wave first. Lili just a little way behind her, Sapphire fell back a little when she skirted around a fallen tree trunk. Without warning, the ground angled sharply downward, and it was covered in pinecones and wet leaves making it as slippery as a water slide. As Wave's sneakers began to scoot out underneath her, Lili caught her forearm. Then, she, too, lost her balance and the two fell onto their butts. They started zooming down the incline.
"Help!" Wave cried. They disappeared down the thick black fog. Sapphire could hear them sliding, but could see them at all. She took a step forward to peer further...before she also fell too.
"Whoa!" Sapphire croaked now also sliding too. "Guys! Guys! Look out!" She yelled. Instinctively she rolled to the side so she would avoid hurtling into her friends, but the ground dropped away beneath her and she sailed into thin air before thumping hard onto the ground.
"Sapphire! Are you okay?" Wave whispered from somewhere above.
"Ow." Sapphire replied. "I'm fine!" She heard someone shuffling behind her. It had to be Lili. Lucky the didn't land on top of each other. Sapphire turned around but the fog was too thick to see her. She heard panting.
"I can't see you, Sapph." Wave called. "Lili can you see her?" Wait. Lili?
"No..." Lili replied from somewhere above.
"Amy? Electra?" Sapphire called into the fog scooting backwards on her butt. "Is this a prank? Can you guys see me now?"
"No..."
"I don't think i'm alone guys..."
"What?"
"Listen..." The panting was loud in the silence. Somethinging poked Sapphire's shoulder. Sapphire screamed as she jumped up.
"Help! Help!"
"Sapphire? What's wrong? What's happening?" Wave called. Strong fingers coiled around Sapphire's arm.
"It's me! Lili! i've got you! Wave, help me pull her up!" Hand over hand, they pulled Sapphire up. She couldn't see either of them. She fought to catch her breath.
"Someone's down there!" She panted. "We need to go back to camp!" Sapphire tugged on Lili's hand and grabbed Wave's before running blindly through the fog.
"Don't stop!" Lili begged. Heavy footfalls galloped behind them. It had climbed up the slope! It was coming after them!
"It's chasing us!" Wave squealed. The someone-something- howled. It was high pitch and angry and it followed them as they ran. It was a crazy shriek. A wild scream.
"It's Cropsy!" Sapphire screamed. Squealing in terror, the three friends raced on.
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Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
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on December 26, 2017
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
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on August 15, 2017
Nice chapter! :3
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Thank you! :3
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No problem X3
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 04, 2017
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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Sorry! D:
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Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
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on August 12, 2017
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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It couldddddddddd
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Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 24, 2017
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on July 23, 2017
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 24, 2017
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on July 08, 2017
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
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on February 14, 2017
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 24, 2017
Please update soon Sapphire!
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Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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on January 08, 2017
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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on January 07, 2017
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on January 07, 2017
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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Thank you :3
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No problem X3
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on January 07, 2017
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on January 07, 2017
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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on January 06, 2017
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on January 06, 2017
What's gonna happen? XD
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dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 16, 2016
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on December 11, 2016
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
The new chapter is good! :D
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Thanks! X3
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No problem X3
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
Wym its getting confusing?
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