Summer Camp Story

Summer Camp Story

I made this story before but due to mainly my pure laziness I didn't finihs it so this is a remake! I want to thank: @Chocolate_And_Cheese, @Lady_Artems, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart for taking part and letting me use thier OC's in my story. Based off the book Summer Camp Secrets: Hide and Shriek, enjoy!

published on November 04, 2016not completed

Brave or Stupid?

There were seven campers left; Trinty, Wave, Red, Sapphire, Lilli, Jackie, Victoria and Yamilette.
"Should I break out some magazines?" Lilli asked.
"Pass." Red said. "Anyone want a marshmellow?"
"Pass." Sapphire groaned. "I have eaten way too much already." She leaned back holding her stomach. Trinity squinted at the fog as it cloaked the lake. Was there a dark blotch in the middle of it? A boat shaped blotch?
"Guys?" She got up and craned her neck. "Do you see anything strange out there?"
"What?" Red stood and walked boldly towards the water. Apart from Trinty, the other girls walked to where Red was.
"It's just fog." Wave said after a beat. "So? No big deal."
"Spooky fog." Jackie remarked. They were quiet for a moment listening to the fire popping and crackling.
"Hey, I see it!" Lilli announced. "What do you think it is?"
"Cropsy's boat!" Red joked.
"He didn't have a boat." Wave scoffed. "Randy had a boat."
"It doesn't look like a boat to me." Jackie tilted her head. "Maybe a rock?"
"Are there any big rocks in Qfeast lake? I don't think there are." Lilli pointed at the shape.
"Nightmare fuel!" Yamilette sang. She came over to Trinty and sat down. "I feel like we're in a scary movie!" She said. Trinty frowned as no one denied this. Lilli, Jackie and Victoria headed back to the campfire too.
"It's okay." Lilli whispered to Trinty. "They'll be back soon." Sapphire, Red and Wave stayed on the ledge of the lake, staring at the boatlike shadow on Qfeast Lake.

"Trust our bunk to have a night like this." Wave grumbled. She was tired with all the drama and freakiness with the creepy fog, the strange boat thing on the lake, the something creeping just off to the right rustling in the bushes...wait, what? She quickly turned her head and squinted in the direction of the rustling/
"What is it?" Sapphire asked her.
"Amy?" Wave called. Her voice was hoarse, just like everyone else's. They were all still croaking from the campfire singing. "Is that you?" There was no answer. The noise grew lower and a little closer.
"Do you guys hear that?" Wave asked.
"It's probably just a little animal, like a possum," Lilli said. "Or a bird."
"It sounds like footsteps," Wave insisted.
"It does not! It sounds like an animal," Lilli argued, but the quaver in her voice betrayed her uncertainty. She then raised her voice. "Amy? Blaze? Rouge?" The creepy noise stopped.
"You heard THAT right?" Wave asked.
"Hello?" Lilli called, her voice scratchy. "Anyone there?" Nothing. No one spoke for a moment. Sapphire cupped her hands around her mouth and faced the thick, dark woods.
"Amy! We're sorry! Come back!" Her voice registered barely above a whisper. They all started to screech, hoarsely.
"Blaze!"
"Rouge!"
"Maria! Electra! Amy!" Wave thought of how pale Blaze must look out there in the forest and had a crazy moment where she thought: Blaze wasn't really a vampire, was she? But she knew she was just thinking like that to scare herself...right?

The friends had decided to search around everyone's tents for flashlights and anything helpful.
"Did you guys find anything?" Sapphire asked coming from around the back of her tent.
"Flashlights." Wave said.
"And the Scavenger Hunt notes..." Lilli mentioned. Silence. "Could..." Lilli coughed. "Could this be part of the hunt?"
"What?" Trinty questioned.
"Well, there's only one way to find out." Red spoke nodding to the notes. Yamilette picked up the notes and peered at the pages.
"It's...just a map."
"They planned the whole thing!" Sapphire cheered and sat back. "Sneaky."
"Guys, think about it." Victoria sighed. "They wouldnt make us look for them in the middle of the night. It's not right."
"But look." Wave said pointing to the upside down V shap on the map. "That's our campsite! And looks, there's a big X...exactly where they ran off to." Everyone looked towards the forest again.
"Enough is enough." Wave grunted picking up the map. "I'm going in to see if I can find them."
"Wave no." Red frowned. "Rouge told us to stay here."
"Every time someone leaves they don't come back." Trinty shivered.
"I'm going!" Wave took a flashlight and flicked it on.
"You can't go alone," Sapphire announced. She flashed Wave a smile and picked up another flashlight. Lilli nodded and she stood up putting an arm around Sapphire.
"You guys are not going anywhere without me." Wave looked at Lilli and Sapphire surprised they volunteered to with her. She thought they didn't like her.
"Don't go you guys." Yamilette insisted. Wave tried to sound light-hearted as she said, "Well, it's a little late now. Coming ladies?"
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Oooh shit's got real! Electra is probably dead by now :3
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on January 24, 2018
DAAAAAAAMMNNNN SHITS GETTING REAL
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yeyeyeyeyeyeyyeyeye
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:D Righttttttttt on it XD
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on December 26, 2017
Now theres a funny little thing called conversatio s *wink* (NOT HINTING ANYTHING XD)
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on December 26, 2017
OHHH THIS IS WHAT I CALL A GOOD STORY!!!
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Why a thank you XD
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on November 12, 2017
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on November 12, 2017
Love it!!!
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on November 01, 2017
It has been so long since I last read thus story. Crap it's gotten good!
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You haven't seen most of it yet :P
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Thank you x3
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on August 15, 2017
I am excited to read the rest of it
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on August 15, 2017
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on August 15, 2017
Nice chapter! :3
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Thank you! :3
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No problem X3
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on August 05, 2017
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on August 04, 2017
Damn... is it weird that I legit felt that offence irl?
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Sorry! D:
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Im sorry ^.^U
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on August 03, 2017
It's cool, it just means it was very well applied :)
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on August 03, 2017
I didn't mean it! Its just for the story I swear! D:
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
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on August 03, 2017
Oohh that is creepy
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on July 28, 2017
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@The_Half_Glaceon_Girl , @Megpoid_GUMI, @Noko_The_Chocolatey_Neko, @Rebel_Assasin, @Yamilettethehedgehog101, @Kinnare and @AnimatronicHeart

Sorry this took so long! New chapter! :P
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woah I forgot this was a thing xD
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Very much so XD
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on August 16, 2017
Agh rip.. I'm glad it's over for you now xD less stress..
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on August 16, 2017
They killed me :c I've actually got my results in 3 weeks, but for now I'm focusing on qfeast :3
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on August 15, 2017
That's fine x3 Exams are important, so it's best to focus on them at the time uwu
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on August 15, 2017
Aha, yea, sorry it took so long, I had exams :3
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on August 12, 2017
It's okay no worries I'm at the end of the chapter! XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Also if I got your name wrong I'm really sorry XD
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on July 28, 2017
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on July 28, 2017
Maria: Sapphiireee!! Hurry up and continue!! I wanna see lilgro hap--
Lili: Maria! No, y-you dont. He dont like me anyway. So it wont happen... lilgro wont happen...
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It couldddddddddd
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Only time will tell :P
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on July 24, 2017
(*Hugs back* IMSORRYSOMUCHHASHAPPENEDSINCEIVEBEENOFFHEREANDHADTOTAKEABREAK)
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on July 24, 2017
Lili: *blushes hard* b-But amy..
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on July 24, 2017
(HOLY SHIT YOUR ALIIIVEEE!!!! *HUGS TIGHT*)
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on July 24, 2017
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on July 23, 2017
SAPPHY WHY HAS IT BEEN SO LONG UNTIL AN UPDATE :((
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IM SORRY I FORGOT THIS EXSISTED XD I'll get another one out soon I promise
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on July 08, 2017
Can't wait for the next chapter ?
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on March 30, 2017
Can Trinity go hug Amy? She needs a hug and then maybe the girls can all get along.
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The thing I shall I e actually made this fall out so it can lead to something really big >:3 so I'm making it go on for a little longer eheheh
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on February 14, 2017
I feel a bit bad for Amy...
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on February 12, 2017
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on February 12, 2017
Just a friendly reminder to update this story soon. Much appriciation if you do.
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Of course, I've took quite a long break this story is actually the first on my list to update :)
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on February 05, 2017
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on February 05, 2017
What did Electra roll her eyes at me for? Did I make an anime pun?
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But in reality, most likely XD
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on January 26, 2017
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on January 26, 2017
Amy thinks it's because Electra was making fun of her to you :3
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on January 24, 2017
Please update soon Sapphire!
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Will do :)
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on January 09, 2017
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on January 08, 2017
WHY HASNT SOMEONE COME TO AMY AND HUG HER
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Cuz everyone thinks she's a butt
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Yes, but no one notices it :)
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on January 09, 2017
BUT SHES OBVIOUSLY DEPRESSED.
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on January 08, 2017
Also really great*claps*???
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on January 07, 2017
Luckily I can catch up in very little time. I have very mixed feelings about Amy, sometimes nice sometimes mean...
But thank you Amy for letting Trinity stay in your tent
The woods are scawy :3
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on January 07, 2017
Awww poor Amy love the chapter by the way X3
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Thank you :3
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No problem X3
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on January 07, 2017
I really hope lilgro happens..
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on January 06, 2017
You need to update this soon.*poke*
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Have way through the next chap :3 it's just a case of finding time :D
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on January 06, 2017
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on January 06, 2017
What's gonna happen? XD
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dUN DUN DUNNNNNN XD
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
He might be~
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on December 19, 2016
Cropsy coming?
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on December 19, 2016
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on December 19, 2016
NOT SENT HOME PLEASE NO! DX
(Also why you no agree to a Vocaloid friend for Jackie :( )
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Oh yeahhhhh forgot about that XD aha, idk if there's anymore room for another characture, maybe a mention though?
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on December 11, 2016
You made Victoria the shipper of the group didn't you? XD
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Hehehehehehehe maybe XD more of the one that tries to get everyone together secretly :P
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Heheheh >:3 then do it she shall
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on November 30, 2016
I see her doing that, actually...
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
The new chapter is good! :D
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Thanks! X3
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No problem X3
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on November 29, 2016
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on November 29, 2016
I hope lili and negro get together...

Also

WHERES THE NEXT CHAPTER 4 MY STORY?! IVE WAITED AGES!! *growls*
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I'm sorry, it's getting really confusing ^.^U
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I'm just confused on what's going on in that story, like what I have to write, when comes next, when to end the chapter, you know??
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on November 28, 2016
Wym its getting confusing?
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