The Woods

The Woods

Jay Wilson was an ordinary 12 year old. He had good parents, he had a good school, and had good friends. One day him and Kyle (Jay's friend) had got lost in the deep woods. With only a a flashlight, energy bar, pocket knife, and 2 water canteens, Jay and Kyle must fight through the forces of nature, while finding their way back to camp.

published on August 12, 2015not completed

A Higher Chance of Survival

"What a beautiful day!" Said Kyle, waking Jay up. The ground was pretty dry because the sun was out. Kyle went out and marked some landmarks with a stick stabbed into the ground. While Kyle was exploring, he stepped on something. He raised his foot and found a pocket knife. It looked new, as if it were dropped by an airplane. It was sharp, so it would last.

Kyle came back and showed Jay the pocket knife. They both were happy because they have a better chance of surviving now. Kyle had then broke off some bits from the energy bar for breakfast. Now Kyle was starting to worry about a fire. They were pretty cold last night, and Kyle didn't want it to happen again.

Lunch had came by and Kyle had made a fire ring with tinder in it. He had found some flint out near a pond. He cut a piece of his shirt off and put it between the flint and the pocket knife. Then Kyle quickly scraped the knife and the cloth had started to catch on fire. He then threw it in the fire ring and the fire sprung to life. "Hello, fire." said Jay.
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great story,your vocabulary is outstanding!
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on November 24, 2015
This is so good and you are talented!
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on August 29, 2015