The Woods

The Woods

Jay Wilson was an ordinary 12 year old. He had good parents, he had a good school, and had good friends. One day him and Kyle (Jay's friend) had got lost in the deep woods. With only a a flashlight, energy bar, pocket knife, and 2 water canteens, Jay and Kyle must fight through the forces of nature, while finding their way back to camp.

published on August 12, 2015not completed

A Rainy Night

Dinner had came quick and they had another piece of the energy bar. Though it wasn't much, it was good enough to help them. Jay then felt a drop, a rain drop. Both of the boys looked at each other with the same expression. It then starting drizzling and they both went to the shelter. Outside was all wet and they were dry as if they were in the desert.

It was then night time and it was getting colder. They both curled up next to each other to maintain heat and comfort. Then they both started a conversation. They both thought if it was the end of them, but they tried to keep high hopes.

They had both fell asleep at the same time, and in the early morning the rain had stopped. The storm was a quick storm, moving away from the camp. They both slept hard, as if they hadn't slept in 2 days.
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great story,your vocabulary is outstanding!
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on November 24, 2015
This is so good and you are talented!
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on August 29, 2015